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1,000 Petals

Enlightenment through meditation

3 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 2-5-2 syllable poem, 1000 Petals, has the proper formatting and touches on the jumping-off point of greater assimilation with the whole of understanding.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
    Thanks for the review Bill.
Comment from Graybærd
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Definitely spiritual in every sense of the word.
Your ability to say so much in so few words is a testament to your abilities. I do love the artwork as well.
May I suggest (just for to look at) centering the text with that artwork?

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
    Didn't know you could I'll have to check it out.
reply by Graybærd on 13-Jan-2019
    Yeah. I just found out myself.
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
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What a peaceful and powerful message you've shared with your little 2-4-2. I love your chosen title, "1000 Petal." Thanks for the interesting author facts on how you arrived at the title. :) Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
    Thanks but is 2 5 2 contest. You had me worried there.