What Breaks My Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "The Story of Ugly"Poems and stories tellin' it like I see it.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This was a painful read ago know an animal was so cruelly treated and your wise words toward the end is a lesson to all of us, I enjoyed your heartfelt story, a very touching write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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This was a painful read ago know an animal was so cruelly treated and your wise words toward the end is a lesson to all of us, I enjoyed your heartfelt story, a very touching write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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Thank you for all the stars and your gracious review!
Comment from poetwatch
You wrote a whopper of a poem. I can see this fleabag of a cat with this line "Maybe on the surface there wasn't a lot worth seeing. / To this, there's probably not much disagreeing." Yet, beauty is only skin deep and you made me feel sorry about the cat that only wanted to be loved. :( This is a good entry for the Share A Story in a Poem contest.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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You wrote a whopper of a poem. I can see this fleabag of a cat with this line "Maybe on the surface there wasn't a lot worth seeing. / To this, there's probably not much disagreeing." Yet, beauty is only skin deep and you made me feel sorry about the cat that only wanted to be loved. :( This is a good entry for the Share A Story in a Poem contest.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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Thank you! Your review and all the stars are very much appreciated!
