Little Poems
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Comment from Joan E.
Thanks for adding the "Animated Still" head with your rock photograph and sharing another form with the L'Arora". The rock does remind me of the Easter Island monoliths. I enjoyed the hybrid form with rhymes and line count but no syllable count. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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Thanks for adding the "Animated Still" head with your rock photograph and sharing another form with the L'Arora". The rock does remind me of the Easter Island monoliths. I enjoyed the hybrid form with rhymes and line count but no syllable count. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much Joan, I am pleased you see it too. I think my Animated Stills collection might get published this year. Cheers!
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Congratulations on the plan to publish your Animated Stills collection this year--it should be a very popular work. More cheers- Joan
Comment from meeshu
yes, it really does. I suspect it is the fossilized skull of one of the giants living in cities under the Antarctic ice. or maybe it's just a rock, I can't be sure. a really wonderful poem, Treischel....................meeshu
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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yes, it really does. I suspect it is the fossilized skull of one of the giants living in cities under the Antarctic ice. or maybe it's just a rock, I can't be sure. a really wonderful poem, Treischel....................meeshu
Comment Written 02-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Thank you Meeshu, Definitely the giants under the polar ice.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written A L'Arora poem about the bolder on the pathway shaped in the form of an alien skull, the evidence that aliens exist and that one or other time we will all see them when they arrive on earth once more.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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A very well-written A L'Arora poem about the bolder on the pathway shaped in the form of an alien skull, the evidence that aliens exist and that one or other time we will all see them when they arrive on earth once more.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Thank you Sandras, The time is approaching. The truth is out there. Lol.
Comment from Pantygynt
Now here we have one of the forty shades of Gray that no one ever noticed before. Tom, you have become infected with a serious dose of VDD (Von Daniken's Disease). It is apt to take hold on highly imaginative folk with creative minds even if the discoverer himself has largely been discredited.
This Laura Lamarca is herself a very creative spirit being responsible for many new poetic forms, several of which have been featured in the Potlach club here on FS, while you have been otherwise involved.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Now here we have one of the forty shades of Gray that no one ever noticed before. Tom, you have become infected with a serious dose of VDD (Von Daniken's Disease). It is apt to take hold on highly imaginative folk with creative minds even if the discoverer himself has largely been discredited.
This Laura Lamarca is herself a very creative spirit being responsible for many new poetic forms, several of which have been featured in the Potlach club here on FS, while you have been otherwise involved.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Thank you Jim. I am certain I missed a lot. I am intrigued by the format you are involved with with Carol called a Sapphonic Triad. I understand the triad part, but wonder what gives it the sapphic designation.
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It was a long time ago now since we put it together. At the beginning the initial quotation was something deep and philosophical perhaps some of the very first were from Sappho herself. I shall have to ask Carol.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Yes it does have the characteristic's of an alien's head.
So far no such evidence has been reported that is concrete
enough to tell us it is true. Good eye Tom. You have a talent for finding the unusual. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Yes it does have the characteristic's of an alien's head.
So far no such evidence has been reported that is concrete
enough to tell us it is true. Good eye Tom. You have a talent for finding the unusual. Nancy:)
Comment Written 02-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Thank you Nancy. I try. Lol.
Comment from Miss Sherry
Live for the X Files and Ancient Aliens...so this has me enthralled. Naysayers will proclaim it just a rock, but me and Mulder know better. I just wish they would come back and take me home.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Live for the X Files and Ancient Aliens...so this has me enthralled. Naysayers will proclaim it just a rock, but me and Mulder know better. I just wish they would come back and take me home.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Thank You OldPoet, Hah! Well you've been on this planet so long, why leave?
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There might be a place where dozens of Johhny Depps live - all who want an old woman!
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Lol
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
History reminds extra-terrestrial visited us, now poet has seen a stone like a skull and thinks of it an alien evidence; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspiring Changing. Wish You Happy New Year! -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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History reminds extra-terrestrial visited us, now poet has seen a stone like a skull and thinks of it an alien evidence; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspiring Changing. Wish You Happy New Year! -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 02-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Thank you ALD. You never know. The truth is out there! Lol.
Comment from SueZen
Really enjoyed reading this poem, all it describes in detail and the author notes too.
The stone may well be the skull of an Alien!
I definitely believe in Aliens and am very interested in ancient cultures and their
carvings in rocks, many of which are of spaceships, similar to those people today have seen with their own eyes and have taken photos of.
A friend of mine, very 'normal', grounded in this reality, not at all airy-fairy, receives 'messages' from a 'sub-group' of the Pleiadians. So, there you go, we don't necessarily need to see with our (limited) 5 senses to believe in worlds beyond our immediate horizon. Thanks for sharing this delightful story.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Really enjoyed reading this poem, all it describes in detail and the author notes too.
The stone may well be the skull of an Alien!
I definitely believe in Aliens and am very interested in ancient cultures and their
carvings in rocks, many of which are of spaceships, similar to those people today have seen with their own eyes and have taken photos of.
A friend of mine, very 'normal', grounded in this reality, not at all airy-fairy, receives 'messages' from a 'sub-group' of the Pleiadians. So, there you go, we don't necessarily need to see with our (limited) 5 senses to believe in worlds beyond our immediate horizon. Thanks for sharing this delightful story.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Thank You SueZen. I appreciate these comments and favorable review from a kindred spirit.. Yes, if you watch the series Ancient Aliens, the evidence is undeniable,
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Thanks for kind response and for tip - shall certainly watch the series you mention and hope available on YouTube.
