She won't be right, Mate!
The world in turmoil22 total reviews
Comment from Miss Sherry
I guess it does not matter where we live - the earth is home to all of us. You have expressed poignantly the problems we face. I would love to live on a sustainable farm and make do with nature's gifts. If only we all tried to do this, things would get better. You write with a conscience and a truth that I admire!
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2018
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I guess it does not matter where we live - the earth is home to all of us. You have expressed poignantly the problems we face. I would love to live on a sustainable farm and make do with nature's gifts. If only we all tried to do this, things would get better. You write with a conscience and a truth that I admire!
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2018
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Thanks Mate, for your review and kind comments. Cheers, Kev
Comment from LIJ Red
I might differ about the raping and pillaging for little gain, since people are getting poorer and poorer as individuals, and their needs cry out, but rape and pillage it is nonetheless. Good research, excellent message in the free verse...
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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I might differ about the raping and pillaging for little gain, since people are getting poorer and poorer as individuals, and their needs cry out, but rape and pillage it is nonetheless. Good research, excellent message in the free verse...
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Thanks mate, for your review and comments, much obliged. Cheers, kev
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello way2gokevs
You aren't the only one that realizes that for the number of things you mentioned in your free style poem speaks the truth of how we should find ways to bring
Mother Nature from the way
Our Creator desires to be. Gert
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Hello way2gokevs
You aren't the only one that realizes that for the number of things you mentioned in your free style poem speaks the truth of how we should find ways to bring
Mother Nature from the way
Our Creator desires to be. Gert
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Thanks Gert for your review and comments. Only the people can change the way we treat this planet. Cheers, Kev.
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You are so welcome way2gokevs
Gert
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Very true and educational. Couple little glitches. Check spelling on these: oversight, throughout, undone, supermarkets (Please know I could be wrong and no time to check today for you!) Also, I thought you may be exercising poetic license and spelling the words as you did for a reason.
NOW . . . your poem is excellent! I am out of sixes. So very sorry. It is loaded with truth and honesty and we are awarded with the poetical flow and as I mentioned, the education of it. Good luck! Great job! Wendy
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Very true and educational. Couple little glitches. Check spelling on these: oversight, throughout, undone, supermarkets (Please know I could be wrong and no time to check today for you!) Also, I thought you may be exercising poetic license and spelling the words as you did for a reason.
NOW . . . your poem is excellent! I am out of sixes. So very sorry. It is loaded with truth and honesty and we are awarded with the poetical flow and as I mentioned, the education of it. Good luck! Great job! Wendy
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Thanks so very much Wendy for your review and comments, much appreciated. Cheers and have a good day. Kev
Comment from rjuselius
indeed, greed has become a virtue and in the name of money we push on. It's ridiculous if you ever think that we have clean water in our toilets and people in another part of the world must travel many many miles to get water even not clean necessarily.
thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a hearty hug!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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indeed, greed has become a virtue and in the name of money we push on. It's ridiculous if you ever think that we have clean water in our toilets and people in another part of the world must travel many many miles to get water even not clean necessarily.
thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a hearty hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Thank-you Rebekka, for your review and comments. Have a great Day. Kev
Comment from WryWriter
Your poem makes some very valid points. Unfortunately, unless people do more than simply read about the problems you mention, not much will be done. The almighty dollar speaks the loudest these days.... Which doesn't say much for what is being taught from one generation to the next as far as priorities. Gorgeous artwork choice for your poem. Great job with this work!
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Your poem makes some very valid points. Unfortunately, unless people do more than simply read about the problems you mention, not much will be done. The almighty dollar speaks the loudest these days.... Which doesn't say much for what is being taught from one generation to the next as far as priorities. Gorgeous artwork choice for your poem. Great job with this work!
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Thanks so much for your review and comments, much appreciated. You are right it is up to the people on this earth to step up.
Cheers, Kev
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, She Won't Be Right, Mate, gathers together the known problems we are swamped with today and points a finger back at ourselves to make this right. The earth's existence, and a social world worth saving is out there.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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This poem, She Won't Be Right, Mate, gathers together the known problems we are swamped with today and points a finger back at ourselves to make this right. The earth's existence, and a social world worth saving is out there.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Thanks Bill, kind of you to stop by review and comment, much appreciated. Cheers, Kev
Comment from Sugarray77
This is very inspirational with the encouragement to keep Mother Earth safe and protected. Your stanzas were well developed and meaningful. Well done.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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This is very inspirational with the encouragement to keep Mother Earth safe and protected. Your stanzas were well developed and meaningful. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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Thanks so much for your review and kind words. Have a great day. Cheers kev
Comment from Violet WolfChild
I salute you my friend and think this deserves a six for the message alone. We really are responsible for the earth and the way things have been. If you're looking for faults in this one I have found none. Words can't express how impressed I am by this piece. I agree with you 110%. Exceptional job. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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I salute you my friend and think this deserves a six for the message alone. We really are responsible for the earth and the way things have been. If you're looking for faults in this one I have found none. Words can't express how impressed I am by this piece. I agree with you 110%. Exceptional job. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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Well thanks heaps Mate, much obliged. Sad fact the world is not learning the lessons of the past and now with the added onslaught of global warming we have to wake up before its to late. Thanks again and you have a great day. cheers Kev
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, and yes if we don't start to work with instead of against Mother nature there will be nothing left for the next generation to appreciate and we will have failed them, very well done****kahpot
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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Excellent, and yes if we don't start to work with instead of against Mother nature there will be nothing left for the next generation to appreciate and we will have failed them, very well done****kahpot
Comment Written 18-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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Thanks very much for your review and comments. Cheers, kev