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Mommyish Wish

mommyish wish..... a free verse

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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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I have been on loads of diets, and then after being slim for a while, find it has all gone back on again while my back was turned! Such is life. I'm not going on another diet, I'm going to change my way of life, I won't be spending so much time on here next year for a start! I need to get out a bit more. I liked this fun poem, and I can see from your profile picture you certainly have got things under control. :)) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
    Thanks, Sandra, for resonating with the message and thanks for the five stars too.
Comment from jenintorre
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I can so relate to this poem. I only have to think about food these days and I put wait on although I was always skinny in my younger days. I hate the thought of having to make kids so aware of what they eat but it seems we must these days. Best wishes. Jen

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
    Thanks Jen for resonating with the message and thanks for the five stars too.
Comment from His Grayness
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I found this work to be very delightful, very well presented with fine photography and great coloration. I have no recommendation to improve this work but thank this author for a truly lovely and delightful work in all ways! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
    Dear Vance, Thanks a bunch for the positive review and the five stars. I know this is very, very late, my apologies.
Comment from Hugh McDowell
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Very well expressed. Men also can have the same issue. I like the kitchen taste test, food buddies and hungry kids themes. I love to cook and taste. Amazing how when I was younger my metabolism kept the weight off. Now, I look at food and gain an ounce! Lol. Hugh

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
    Thanks a lot Hugh for this wonderful and funny review. My so, so late reply but better late than never. Lol
Comment from TPAC
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Comically arranged this particular write captures a mother tender concerns, balancing pleasures with not haves, finding it at time hard to keep even. It does defeat the purpose of weigh loss. All in my opinion.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
    Thanks a lot for the five stars and the perceptive review.
Comment from Ogden
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A convincing poem, though it turns out it's not a plaint, but a been there, done that reflection. Too bad the photo's not you and your kids (except maybe for you and your kids).

Happy holidays!

Ogden (Don)


 Comment Written 05-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
    Thanks a lot Don for the five stars and the positive review.
Comment from susand3022
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I say let's hear it for happy Mommy's everywhere! A happy mommy makes for happy kids... so don't take away her chocolate! Signed... a happy mommy! LOL

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
    Thanks a bunch for this positive review and the five stars.
Comment from Sally Law
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Or being blind. I used to be the skinniest person I knew. My weight has come on in recent years due to my inability to exercise due to hastening vision loss. I keep my skinny clothes in the back closet because I haven't given up. My doctor is working with me and giving me some great advise...eat much less. I write several hours a day and read...no help there. Oh well, slow but sure. I hope you are well and good, able to enjoy a Christmas cookie, or two.
All my best,
Sal

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
    Thanks a lot Sal for this positive review. It took me more than one year to reply back. my deep apologies.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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He he he, the worst thing a Mum can do is eat the left overs on the kids plates! I understand fully the sacrifice women make as Mothers and suffer for it by being overweight! He he he, I enjoyed your poem, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
    Thanks a lot Dolly for the five stars and for resonating with the message of the poem.
Comment from Dean Kuch
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Uh-h-h-hhh, are you saying the woman in your accompanying photograph has weight issues, Susan, LOL?
I think all women are beautiful in their own special way.
I subscribe to the theory that women age like fine wine while men age like milk.
Society places so much emphasis on a person's outward appearance while God only sees the heart inside the individual.
You're right, though. Being overweight isn't healthy and is very hard on that heart God cherishes so much.
Cute poem...
~Dean

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
    Thanks a lot Dean for responding to this cute poem as you say. My deep apologies, it took me more than a year to reply back.