Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Ooooo...like the 'flavor' of this one, Trisha -- great job! :) I would suggest, perhaps, popping in and 'bolding' the first letter of each line to accentuate the word there. :) Does affect the great offering, just the presentation! :) ;) Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :) Yvette

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019

Thanks for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

I didn't notice this was an acrostic poem until I read your notes. It then all became clear to me the point you were trying to get across. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019

Thanks for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Jaye Bennett

Good

The poet has given us a good definition of sensuality and some of its qualities. It just reads like a text book, rather than flows like a poem. That is strictly my opinion. Good picture. Good job.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019

Thanks