Forgotten
A Chain Rhyme34 total reviews
Comment from Donka Kristeva
This reads in one breath, a very moving tale of the forgotten tomb but not the forgotten man. I loved the imagery, and the sense of innocence seemingly forever covered by the growing ivy.
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This reads in one breath, a very moving tale of the forgotten tomb but not the forgotten man. I loved the imagery, and the sense of innocence seemingly forever covered by the growing ivy.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
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Thank you for a wonderful review. I appreciate your comments.
Comment from Gloria ....
This is really an interesting form, Yvonne and as always you've delivered a fine poem of man and nature with exquisite rhyme and metre.
Just lovely and wishing you much luck in the booth. :)
Gloria
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This is really an interesting form, Yvonne and as always you've delivered a fine poem of man and nature with exquisite rhyme and metre.
Just lovely and wishing you much luck in the booth. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 29-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
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Thank you, Gloria. I appreciate that. Here's hoping. 8-) I always look forward to hearing what you have to say.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, I love it!! :) :) Such a deep and calling write, giving voice to the unmarked and recalling all those touched or not touched by the reminder of the life hidden beneath. Just wonderful, ma'am! :) :) Thank you so much for sharing and good luck in the contest! :) Yvette
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Oh, I love it!! :) :) Such a deep and calling write, giving voice to the unmarked and recalling all those touched or not touched by the reminder of the life hidden beneath. Just wonderful, ma'am! :) :) Thank you so much for sharing and good luck in the contest! :) Yvette
Comment Written 29-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
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Thank you for reviewing and for the good wishes.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a beautiful poem in every way Yvonne. The font works well, the style of the poem fits with your words/message, the image is perfect, the meter is super, and the overall appearance is professional. I loved reading it. I could picture everything you mentioned in your poem. You let readers interpret the 'who' is in the grave. That is a great touch. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
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This is a beautiful poem in every way Yvonne. The font works well, the style of the poem fits with your words/message, the image is perfect, the meter is super, and the overall appearance is professional. I loved reading it. I could picture everything you mentioned in your poem. You let readers interpret the 'who' is in the grave. That is a great touch. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 29-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
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Thank you for this awesome review. You know I value your opinion, and always appreciate your comments.
Comment from Boogienights
A wonderful contest entry. Sad and bittersweet. I've never written a chain rhyme, it seems like a challenge...one that you have conquered. Best of luck in the contest.
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A wonderful contest entry. Sad and bittersweet. I've never written a chain rhyme, it seems like a challenge...one that you have conquered. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
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Thank you so much. You must give it a try.
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Yvonne. Sso sorry if I called you Judi again yesterday. Arrggh! I feel so stupid. Anyway, this is a good Chain poem, especciaally for this time of year. My favorite line was:
"The sands of time will leave no hint nor trace,
no tales to tell of brave"Brilliant writing, my dear friend. Bob
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
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Hi, Yvonne. Sso sorry if I called you Judi again yesterday. Arrggh! I feel so stupid. Anyway, this is a good Chain poem, especciaally for this time of year. My favorite line was:
"The sands of time will leave no hint nor trace,
no tales to tell of brave"Brilliant writing, my dear friend. Bob
Comment Written 29-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
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Thank you so much for these lovely remarks. You may call me anything you like and not to worry. Once I get hung on a word, it's hard to get my mind off it. You're far from stupid, my friend.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written poem in the Chain Rhyme format. You always write such great things my friend. This is a six star poem in my eyes. Blessings, Teri
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This is a very beautiful and well written poem in the Chain Rhyme format. You always write such great things my friend. This is a six star poem in my eyes. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 29-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
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Thank you so much, Teri. I really appreciate that.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That is so sad, Yvonne. I see many graves of young men and women that are neglected and overgrown. Their family now gone to join them. I enjoyed this style, my friend, you wrote it so well. Good luck in the contest, I think it's a very strong entry. :)) Sandra xxx
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That is so sad, Yvonne. I see many graves of young men and women that are neglected and overgrown. Their family now gone to join them. I enjoyed this style, my friend, you wrote it so well. Good luck in the contest, I think it's a very strong entry. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 29-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
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I appreciate you saying so, and also the good wishes. Thank you for a wonderful review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written chain-rhyme poem and a wonderful theme chosen to make it an interesting poem of various rhyme patterns and a look at the good and bad things in nature.
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A very well-written chain-rhyme poem and a wonderful theme chosen to make it an interesting poem of various rhyme patterns and a look at the good and bad things in nature.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2018
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Thank you for reviewing, Sandra. Much appreciated.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
I really like your font size. I was able to read your poem without my readers. I don't buy prescription glasses anymore. I went online and asked vision works what was the difference between prescription glasses and drugstore readers was. They said nothing. they're made by the same optic company. I used to pay $400 for scripts. I pay $16 online.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
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I really like your font size. I was able to read your poem without my readers. I don't buy prescription glasses anymore. I went online and asked vision works what was the difference between prescription glasses and drugstore readers was. They said nothing. they're made by the same optic company. I used to pay $400 for scripts. I pay $16 online.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
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I get my cheaters at the Dollar Tree. Thanks for reviewing.
