Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

This is a witty and sarcastic poem about how some reviewers don't pay attention to what they are reading. I like the incorrect grammar to emphasize how wrong the reviewer was.

Congrats on winning the contest
Keep writing

dp

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019

Thanks for the review. I finally win a fan story contest and am grateful for all the reviewers that helped me to improve my writing. Have a great week end. Cheers, j

reply by dragonpoet on 06-Apr-2019

You are very welcome. Enjoy your weekend too.

Joan

reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019

Cheers, j

Comment from moongirlwriter

Excellent

Perfect. This one line poem made me smile. Well-said and congrats on your first place win! I do love the artwork that you chose as well. . .it just has that frantic look of. . .oops!:)

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019

Thanks for the encouraging review. You have to smile at some reviews. Cheers, j

reply by moongirlwriter on 06-Apr-2019

:) smiling is good for us.

Comment from Contests

A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019

Thanks, nice to win, cheers, j

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Fun little monostitch which has internal rhyme as well. It is so hard to write these one-liners and make some lasting message. To write one about reviewing and writing is totally relatable to all here.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018

Cheers thanks for the review, j

Comment from country ranch writer

Exceptional

Beautiful picture and work up for your poem I agree it is hard to do a review on such short peoms when it requires at least three lines they should cut us some slack on these short ones to at least one line. It sure would make it easier to say hey I liked your poem.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018

Thanks for review and sparkly stars. I find it a challenge to pack one sentence with enough to make a statement. Cheers, j

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

wronger? they may have been better off mentioning the non-existent word... lol

I like this, but sadly, it also rings true.

Best of luck to you.
G

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018

Thanks for the fun review, cheers, j

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

Hee hee - I like your inventive rhyme - wronger and longer! Clever satire. Got a chuckle from me.

Since you use a period, I recommend capping the first word (One).

Fun picture too.

Chuckling,
rd

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018

Thanks for the helpful review. Just being silly, but someone actually wrote that it should be longer. Cheers, j

reply by rama devi on 12-Oct-2018

:-))

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Now this is a very well written and cute one line poem you have penned for the contest. I love the art work you used and your words. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018

Thanks for the encouraging review Teri. It was a fun write, cheers, j