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Five Prompt Proposals

A Prompted... Contest Entry

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Comment from Debbie Pope
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Wow! You went to so much trouble for this contest. You had really good ideas. I particularly like the prompt that deals with the places to travel. I have been thinking about my favorites.
This was really a good post. Excellent suggestions.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
    Thanx Debbie -- didn't realize this was still posted, but glad you enjoyed! :) ;) When the contest was announced, I just started jotting down things as they came to me so, when i actually sat down to complete the contest entry, I had to CHOOSE!!! lol! They were, however, not the right choices -- wink, wink! :) ;) Thanx , as always, for dropping by. :) :)Yvette
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-I really like your proposals, Yvette,
they are all good.
-What sets them apart is your creativity.
-I am not a prose writer, but I found
myself drawn to your topics, especially
the one on the landmarks.
-I also like the listening one, and
the two poetry prompts.
-If I were going to choose one to
write a poem about,"Speak for Me"
appeals to me.
-I hope you win the contest, as your
entries deserve recognition.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
    Wow, Pam -- so glad you enjoyed, and thank you so very much for those wonderful stars! :) ;) You know, when the contest was announced a few weeks ago, I just started jotting down things as they came to me so, when i actually sat down to complete the contest entry, I had to CHOOSE!!! lol! Really appreciate your stopping in for the read and review today - means a lot that you took the time to do so! :) ;) Here's wishing for you a weekend that includes cooling evenings and front-porch fireflies! :) ;) Yvette
reply by Pam (respa) on 22-Sep-2018
    You are very welcome and deserving of the stars and review, Yvette. Your background work paid off!
Comment from rspoet
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Hello Yvette,
You've got some excellent suggestions here.
"Are you listening to me?" is much more reality than fantasy.
A bit of Big Brother. Great prompt for a story.
"Speak for me." opens up to imagination.
All the prompts are well chosen.
Good luck in the contest
Robert

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
    Thanx Robert -- so glad you enjoyed! :) ;) You know, when the contest was announced, I just started jotting down things as they came to me so, when i actually sat down to complete the contest entry, I had to CHOOSE!!! lol! Really appreciate your stopping in for the read and review today - means a lot that you took the time to do so! :) ;) Here's wishing for you a weekend that includes cooling evenings and front-porch fireflies! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from tempeste
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My second last vote is going to you.
You have a very creative, mind ..you wrote 5 original proposals ..in particular , I like the one about memories triggered by one or more of our senses and the one on describing a famous landmark which is a blind nominative ...it was a pleasure to see you added , besides the Colosseo di Roma , Il Duomo di Milano ..a stunning gothic cathedral. You are difinitely a person that tends to offer " out of the box " options .

When I read the first proposal " are you listening to me?" I couldn't help laughing ..years ago I put a band-aid over my PC webcam and it's still ther. [biggrin] just in case ....


 Comment Written 21-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
    Wow! Thank you so very much for those beautiful stars, tempeste -- you have made my 'week's end' so much brighter!! :) :) And I truly am glad my ideas have sparked an interest in your cove of creativity there. :) :) You know, when the contest was announced, I just started jotting down things as they came to me so, when i actually sat down to complete the contest entry, I had to CHOOSE!!! lol! I'm hoping other folks like them as much as you did -- would love to see some of them in a contest! :) Really appreciate your stopping in for the read and review today - means a lot that you took the time to do so! :) ;) Here's wishing for you a week's ending that includes cooling evenings and front-porch fireflies! :) ;) Yvette
    P. S. I have a small piece of duct tape over mine!! :) :)
Comment from MissMerri
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There are some excellent suggestions here. I would like to see some of these prompts used, and preferably soon. I found the first idea especially intriguing for a story possibility. (I think you meant to say "it has been speculated," didn't you?) I also liked "Triggered" very much. The possibilities are endless!
I hope this entry does well in this contest. I liked it a lot. MM

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
    So glad you found some of them exciting, MM -- and, yes, that's what I meant (of course) thank you for catching it -- guess when i read through it, my brain just put the correct word there and continued onward!! :) :) And I truly am glad my ideas have sparked an interest in your cove of creativity there. :) :) You know, when the contest was announced, I just started jotting down things as they came to me so, when i actually sat down to complete the contest entry, I had to CHOOSE!!! lol! I'm hoping other folks like them as much as you did -- would love to see some of them in a contest! :) Really appreciate your stopping in for the read and review today - means a lot that you took the time to do so! :) ;) Here's wishing for you a week's ending that includes cooling evenings and front-porch fireflies! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from robyn corum
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YM,

A great entry for the Prompted contest. Kudos!!

What I like best, I think, is that your inspirational nuggets are so far from our normal fare. I can easily see how these prompts can get the writer's juices flowing and start something fresh and new around here.

Nice! Thanks and good luck!

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
    Thanx Robyn -- so glad you enjoyed! :) ;) When the contest was announced, I just started jotting down things as they came to me so, when i actually sat down to complete the contest entry, I had to CHOOSE!!! lol! I'm hoping other folks like them as much as you did -- would love to see some of them in a contest! :) Really appreciate your stopping in for the read and review today - means a lot that you took the time to do so! :) ;) Here's wishing for you a weekend that includes cooling evenings and front-porch fireflies! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from Mastery
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Hi, Yvette. You do have some dandy ideas here,my friend. I wish I was still writing poetry and short stories, i would jump right on a couple of your ideas.But alas, I only write novels now and they take ll of my time, I'm afraid.

I did think the one with 5500 words was a bit of an extreme length though. ( Maybe not. :)

And I am not sure all aboard know the definition of eschews. LOL I just barely do.

Good job, Yvette. Good luck in the contest. Bob

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
    Thanx, Bob, for checking in....always love to hear from you!! Well, good about the word 'eschews'...maybe they'll look it up - lol! And the 5500 was a max meaning it could be anything under that...so, that pretty much leaves the field wide open when it comes to length. ;) :) Appreciate your time -means a lot that you took the time! ;) ;) Blessings for the rest of the week! Yvette ;)
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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Very nice list. I would find some of these difficult, but that's cuz I'm lazy. I especially like the prompt about AI devices listening in to all we say at home... spying, but for whom? Maybe for their own shadow government! :)

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
    Thanx Phyllis -- that was actually my very favorite idea! :) ;) You know, when the contest was announced, I just started jotting down things as they came to me so, when i actually sat down to complete the contest entry, I had to CHOOSE!!! lol! I'm hoping other folks like them as much as you did -- would love to see some of them in a contest! :) Really appreciate your stopping in for the read and review today - means a lot that you took the time to do so! :) ;) Here's wishing for you a week's ending that includes cooling evenings and front-porch fireflies! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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You made me smile here Yvette. Not sure if you know but Google Home recorded a private conversation between a couple who were complaining about another couple they had just had dinner with, and the system thought the conversation was to be sent to them! A very embarrassing situation occurred, you cannot always trust technology! Anyway, back to your entry, I liked your prompts, all food for thought! Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
    Thanx Dolly -- and yes, I did, which is why two things are true: first, that's why it made it to the top of my list there, and, second, I will NEVER have one of those things in my house!!! :) ;) You know, when the contest was announced, I just started jotting down things as they came to me so, when i actually sat down to complete the contest entry, I had to CHOOSE!!! lol! I'm hoping other folks like them as much as you did -- would love to see some of them in a contest! :) Really appreciate your stopping in for the read and review today - means a lot that you took the time to do so! :) ;) Here's wishing for you a week's ending that includes cooling evenings and front-porch fireflies! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Yvette, I think you have some great ideas here. I liked all three prose prompts. They have great scope. The poem suggestions are very good I think. All the best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
    Thanx Ulla -- so glad you found them interesting! :) ;) You know, when the contest was announced, I just started jotting down things as they came to me so, when i actually sat down to complete the contest entry, I had to CHOOSE!!! lol! I'm hoping other folks like them as much as you did -- would love to see some of them in a contest! :) Really appreciate your stopping in for the read and review today - means a lot that you took the time to do so! :) ;) Here's wishing for you a week's ending that includes cooling evenings and front-porch fireflies! :) ;) Yvette