Fanstory, I am There!
A comedy/romance sitcom16 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Okay....I try, but then I read this and Dean's and laugh out loud thinking well I HAD FUN writing mine but good gravy marie you guys are so clever! Loved the way you gave the "his view/her view"--and wove your theme around fanstory! I'm lucky to grab third place...
and congrats to you on second (and Dean on first)--such fun to have a uniquely themed contest! What the devil dog will I do with my thirteen fifty in member dollars? Woo-hoo!
Karenina
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Okay....I try, but then I read this and Dean's and laugh out loud thinking well I HAD FUN writing mine but good gravy marie you guys are so clever! Loved the way you gave the "his view/her view"--and wove your theme around fanstory! I'm lucky to grab third place...
and congrats to you on second (and Dean on first)--such fun to have a uniquely themed contest! What the devil dog will I do with my thirteen fifty in member dollars? Woo-hoo!
Karenina
Comment Written 05-Aug-2018
Comment from Gloria ....
Ha, Mav this is fun. I am singing along to the old Green Acres tune. You've very wittily captured both voices in this delightful parody and made it just naughty enough to be nice and just ballsy enough to be naughty.
Fantastic. Perhaps Tom will make it the site's theme song. That would be fun.
Great job with a super parody.
ange
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Ha, Mav this is fun. I am singing along to the old Green Acres tune. You've very wittily captured both voices in this delightful parody and made it just naughty enough to be nice and just ballsy enough to be naughty.
Fantastic. Perhaps Tom will make it the site's theme song. That would be fun.
Great job with a super parody.
ange
Comment Written 02-Aug-2018
Comment from Susanjohn
MIKEY!!!!! naughty mikey!!! now this is stuck in my head!!!!...good Lord!... you clever boy you...great entry to the contest ...and of course I'm singing right along. SILENTLY singing in my head...dont want the neighbors to hear that!! Lol :-)))
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MIKEY!!!!! naughty mikey!!! now this is stuck in my head!!!!...good Lord!... you clever boy you...great entry to the contest ...and of course I'm singing right along. SILENTLY singing in my head...dont want the neighbors to hear that!! Lol :-)))
Comment Written 31-Jul-2018
Comment from Pamusart
Hi Michael. Have not heard from you in awhile. I have missed you. I like reading from a man's point of view sometimes. This satisfies that craving. This is a good entry for the contest. It has good meter which makes it an easy read. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing. I especially liked this verse.
"Fumbling with all of the words I store;
Damn, they're falling all over the floor."
Great imagery.
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Hi Michael. Have not heard from you in awhile. I have missed you. I like reading from a man's point of view sometimes. This satisfies that craving. This is a good entry for the contest. It has good meter which makes it an easy read. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing. I especially liked this verse.
"Fumbling with all of the words I store;
Damn, they're falling all over the floor."
Great imagery.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2018
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hah, call me dense (everyone else does) but it took me a moment to realize this was for the TV show theme poetry contest, Mike.
Your lyrics went along well with the theme song and were funny as could be.
Thanks very much for using your talents to make us laugh today.
At least this time it was on purpose, Ah-ha-ha-ha-a-a-aaaa...
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Hah, call me dense (everyone else does) but it took me a moment to realize this was for the TV show theme poetry contest, Mike.
Your lyrics went along well with the theme song and were funny as could be.
Thanks very much for using your talents to make us laugh today.
At least this time it was on purpose, Ah-ha-ha-ha-a-a-aaaa...
Comment Written 30-Jul-2018
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Mikey;
Great parody of a song many of us will be familiar with. In fact, now it's stuck in my head.
This is precisely why I'm only on FS when my hubby is at work,
patty
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Hi, Mikey;
Great parody of a song many of us will be familiar with. In fact, now it's stuck in my head.
This is precisely why I'm only on FS when my hubby is at work,
patty
Comment Written 30-Jul-2018
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written tv show theme song about Fanstory - days of our lives. Writing and rhyming is the games we play, review for some pumps to display your works.
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A very well-written tv show theme song about Fanstory - days of our lives. Writing and rhyming is the games we play, review for some pumps to display your works.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2018
Comment from nordicgirl
Hehehe! This is a total laugh and a half, michael. It sings along perfectly and I can here their voices too. I can't imagine anyone topping this. I think it's a winner. NG
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Hehehe! This is a total laugh and a half, michael. It sings along perfectly and I can here their voices too. I can't imagine anyone topping this. I think it's a winner. NG
Comment Written 30-Jul-2018
Comment from country ranch writer
GREEN ACRES IS WHERE YOU WON'T BE DEAR FRIEND THEY HAVE BANNED YOU FROM THEIR TV! TERRIBLE DITTY FOR THIS YOU YOUNG SPROUT FOR PEOPLE TO SEE HOW RUTTING YOU BE.
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GREEN ACRES IS WHERE YOU WON'T BE DEAR FRIEND THEY HAVE BANNED YOU FROM THEIR TV! TERRIBLE DITTY FOR THIS YOU YOUNG SPROUT FOR PEOPLE TO SEE HOW RUTTING YOU BE.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2018
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL! :) :) A fun read especially when you try to sing along with eva and eddie in mind - can actually hear each of their voices with the lines you've written here!! :) :) Humorously written and matches the intended melody well -- good job! :)
Thanx for sharing that smile and that romp down memory lane today! :)
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LOL! :) :) A fun read especially when you try to sing along with eva and eddie in mind - can actually hear each of their voices with the lines you've written here!! :) :) Humorously written and matches the intended melody well -- good job! :)
Thanx for sharing that smile and that romp down memory lane today! :)
Comment Written 30-Jul-2018
