Comment from RFL

Excellent

Michael, this is a very clever poem and well-told. I wonder how many boys fall in love with their teachers. I think Macron did, but he was a bit older :). Congrats on the win. Best, Rona

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018

I imagine quite a few. Mrs. Jacobs was the BEST! I was a terrible student except for that one year. LOL Thanks so much. mike :))

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

This is a good entry for the contest. Lots of little boys get crushes on their teachers. I am guessing that some little girls do too for the male teachers. Puppy love it is called. You got over it,
Right? Now it is
A fond memory. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018

Well ... I kinda got over it. LOL Thanks so much for a fun review. Much appreciated. :))

Comment from Angela Hayes

Excellent

Good read, educational, interesting, well presented, matching image, easy to read, creative way of using words, two people in love, inspirational. Good Luck!

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2018

Comment from Phillip C Kuhn

Excellent

This one was to funny, I enjoyed the somewhat of a twist at the end when you find out that you were in the third grade, it was written well and had a nice smooth flow, good work

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2018

Comment from Alexander Vasa

Excellent

Hello, what's not to like about this coming of age story, it's sweet, and innocent and has a gentle quaint feel that I thoroughly enjoyed. I think everyone falls under the spell of a good teacher from time to time, they have a lot of scope in your life for both good and bad. I had a few really good ones, and this reminded me of them, although they were Mr.Jacobs, LOL

I noticed no errors and thanks for sharing your writing, Ana

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2018

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

a great story of the love that dare not speak it's name. no wait, that is something else. is Mrs. Jacobs a real person? for me it was Miss Carrie.........meeshu

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2018

Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

I really enjoyed reading this little tale. I certainly agree that intelligence is sexy. Thanks for a lovely read.
I wish you good luck in the competition. Best wishes Jen.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2018

Comment from nordicgirl

Excellent

Awww ... This is just so sweet. It took a bit to realize that this was a crush on your teacher. It all made such sense when I reached the need and was such a heart warming surprise. I just adored this. A winner I think. NG

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2018