Woven
5/7/5 poem28 total reviews
Comment from Raul1
Exceptional poem! I see no mistakes in this one. Congratulations in winning 5-7-5 poem. Doing this kind of poem is very difficult. I can see that you did this with hard work. I like this poem a lot. Great job!
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018
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Exceptional poem! I see no mistakes in this one. Congratulations in winning 5-7-5 poem. Doing this kind of poem is very difficult. I can see that you did this with hard work. I like this poem a lot. Great job!
Comment Written 22-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018
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Thank you so much for this exceptional, I am very touched you liked it so much. I have been writing "short forms" for a long time, but it is always a pleasure to see an writer enjoy my work. Val Crisson
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You're welcome.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Woven, has the proper seventeen-syllable set up and shows us the pattern that we create from living our lives and embracing family. Nice.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018
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This 5-7-5, Woven, has the proper seventeen-syllable set up and shows us the pattern that we create from living our lives and embracing family. Nice.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018
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Thank you for this lovely review
Comment from miajaffri
I rate your poem with 6 stars. I like the message it gives because it speaks of what life is made of. Both happy memories and sad and hurtful ones. We never get over the painful ones but we learn to bury them in the threads of new memories.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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I rate your poem with 6 stars. I like the message it gives because it speaks of what life is made of. Both happy memories and sad and hurtful ones. We never get over the painful ones but we learn to bury them in the threads of new memories.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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I am forever grateful for this "exceptional" review. I have been on this site for a long time, and have had many good haiku and other works respected. But I must say, I have been very touched by the response to this 5/7/5. It really validates why I stay on this site. Thank you. Val
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Keep writing. You have the talent.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a great inspirational poem, Val. Congratulations on you win. I enjoyed reading this. It has a great overall presentation in well-chosen words, correct syllables, great art, & super message. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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What a great inspirational poem, Val. Congratulations on you win. I enjoyed reading this. It has a great overall presentation in well-chosen words, correct syllables, great art, & super message. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 20-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Thank you so much for this lovely review, Jan
Comment from dragonpoet
Congratulations on winning the contest.
This is a good metaphor for life. Each happening in life is just a thread the interweaves with everyone and everything else to create the picture of your life.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
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Congratulations on winning the contest.
This is a good metaphor for life. Each happening in life is just a thread the interweaves with everyone and everything else to create the picture of your life.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 19-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
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Thank you for the lovely review.
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You're welcome.
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Comment from kathleenspalding
Congratulations for your win with this beautiful five - seven - five. Nice sentiment. Excellent use of artwork, color and font for a pleasing visual arrangement. Great job!
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Congratulations for your win with this beautiful five - seven - five. Nice sentiment. Excellent use of artwork, color and font for a pleasing visual arrangement. Great job!
Comment Written 18-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Thank you for this review.
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You're welcome
Comment from Insignificant Weed
Beautiful! I am amazed that an artist can put such emotion and feeling into so few words! The picture compliments your words. Thanks for sharing and congratulations on the winning spot. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Beautiful! I am amazed that an artist can put such emotion and feeling into so few words! The picture compliments your words. Thanks for sharing and congratulations on the winning spot. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Thank you, and yes short forms are "my thing" I feel word economy is essential to good writing, but I am sure few feel the same. None the less, this is such a lovely review. I feel blessed. Val
Comment from Ginnygray
Great 5-7-5, Val! Such true statements about our tapestries of life. Sad tears and sweet laughter really are our memories of different moments in our lives to treasure.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Great 5-7-5, Val! Such true statements about our tapestries of life. Sad tears and sweet laughter really are our memories of different moments in our lives to treasure.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Thank you for this lovely review, and the congrats on my profile. It means a great deal. Val
Comment from Artasylum
This is a beautifully penned 5-7-5... The tapestry is beautiful as are the words you have woven into this beautiful work of art. thanks so much Val and looking forward. yours, diana
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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This is a beautifully penned 5-7-5... The tapestry is beautiful as are the words you have woven into this beautiful work of art. thanks so much Val and looking forward. yours, diana
Comment Written 18-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Thank you for the lovely review. Val
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about life. Life is not only about good things but also bad things from time to time. When we put both good and bad together it is life's tapestry. Congratulations for winning the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about life. Life is not only about good things but also bad things from time to time. When we put both good and bad together it is life's tapestry. Congratulations for winning the contest.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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This is such a lovely review. Thank you so much for the beautiful words. Val