Dolly
Her faith makes her whole20 total reviews
Comment from Scott Dylan Thomas
I really enjoyed the rhyme and meter used by the author. It is also a very interesting topic to write about, raising awareness for the aborignal people of Australia. I love the first line. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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I really enjoyed the rhyme and meter used by the author. It is also a very interesting topic to write about, raising awareness for the aborignal people of Australia. I love the first line. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 06-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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Hi Devin, So very long ago I wrote this. I had to look for it as it didn't ring any bells! Have a look at my recent Faith if you like. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a wonderful tribute to this lady who has seen life and has kept her faith and loves nature and is in touch with life and God, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2020
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This is a wonderful tribute to this lady who has seen life and has kept her faith and loves nature and is in touch with life and God, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2020
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Hi Dolly, Glad you like your namesake's little story/poem. Thanks for reading my friend. Love, Kay XX
Comment from Aurora Musings
A beautiful poem. It resonates with me, and I can feel her strong love and connection to nature and the land. You have depicted a strong beautiful & graceful Aboriginal lady, who proudly adheres to her customs.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2020
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A beautiful poem. It resonates with me, and I can feel her strong love and connection to nature and the land. You have depicted a strong beautiful & graceful Aboriginal lady, who proudly adheres to her customs.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2020
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Hello Aurora, Thanks for reading, glad you liked my poem. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a different faith poem, Aussie, and nicely portrayed of Dolly's beliefs as a Giraween woman. Very apt with what's going on in the world. It fails me why we can't all be seen as 'people' no matter what colour or faith, cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2020
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This is a different faith poem, Aussie, and nicely portrayed of Dolly's beliefs as a Giraween woman. Very apt with what's going on in the world. It fails me why we can't all be seen as 'people' no matter what colour or faith, cheers,
valda
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2020
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In a way Pearl, no different to how I was treated when I lost my leg in a car accident. In the early stages, people shied away from me (I was different you see) I said to one woman, "you can't catch it!' No different to a black person saying, "it won't rub off!" We are all whole under god's hand. Thanks for reading my friend. Love, Kay XX
Comment from kahpot
Yes the true "Aussie" Hello fellow Aussie, what an excellent read and poem on Faith, with great artwork to support these wonderful words, very well done and good luck in your competition****kahpot
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2018
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Yes the true "Aussie" Hello fellow Aussie, what an excellent read and poem on Faith, with great artwork to support these wonderful words, very well done and good luck in your competition****kahpot
Comment Written 09-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2018
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G'day mate, Thanks so much for reading, your review got me recognised! so pleased you enjoyed my poem. Bless you kapot.
(what does that mean?) Love, Kace.
Comment from Bridget Myer
This is unfortunately a true and lasting fact that these traditional Australians face most days.
They are often true and yearn for understanding.
This piece resonates the imbalance of life and all whom live within this multicultural world.
With providing time anda little respect our human nature can truly be enlightened by the people, lives and journeys.
Thanks for sharing
Regards B.M
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2018
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This is unfortunately a true and lasting fact that these traditional Australians face most days.
They are often true and yearn for understanding.
This piece resonates the imbalance of life and all whom live within this multicultural world.
With providing time anda little respect our human nature can truly be enlightened by the people, lives and journeys.
Thanks for sharing
Regards B.M
Comment Written 09-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2018
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Bridget, White men think we are savages sometimes. Our culture is the oldest in the world (54.000 years) God is nature, we worship Him. Kind regards, Kace.
Comment from country ranch writer
A very determined woman to see pass mans faults and understanding. They must take the time to know her to understand her and what she is all about. God is good.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2018
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A very determined woman to see pass mans faults and understanding. They must take the time to know her to understand her and what she is all about. God is good.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2018
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Hello my friend, Thanks so much for dropping in, glad you liked. Your review has got me recognised! Love, Kay.
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So happy for you!
Comment from RGstar
Beautiful dear Aussie. Just simple as the personality of one you describe. Often hurt and rejection in its simplest form can bridge many gaps, for the pure nature of right, the pure nature of love cannot be turned away every time...it will find a way.
My best wishes.
RG
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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Beautiful dear Aussie. Just simple as the personality of one you describe. Often hurt and rejection in its simplest form can bridge many gaps, for the pure nature of right, the pure nature of love cannot be turned away every time...it will find a way.
My best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 05-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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Hello my friend, Thank you for your kind comments. We worship nature and isn't that what god is all about? Love, K.
Comment from nancyjam
I enjoyed your Faith poem entry, Kay.
I love learning about her and her faith
through your beautiful descriptive lines.
Wonderful images - and a lesson for all.
Don't judge.
Nancy
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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I enjoyed your Faith poem entry, Kay.
I love learning about her and her faith
through your beautiful descriptive lines.
Wonderful images - and a lesson for all.
Don't judge.
Nancy
Comment Written 04-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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Hi Nancy, Thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed. God isn't bricks and mortar, we worship His creations. Love, Kay.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there;
I thank you for giving us a descriptive piece about a different faith as your contribution to the Faith Poetry contest. The image of Dolly and her pace is stamped into my mind as I reflect on the Bahaime belief system. It reminded me a great deal of the Spirit Gods of the Native Americans.
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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Hi there;
I thank you for giving us a descriptive piece about a different faith as your contribution to the Faith Poetry contest. The image of Dolly and her pace is stamped into my mind as I reflect on the Bahaime belief system. It reminded me a great deal of the Spirit Gods of the Native Americans.
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 04-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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Hello my friend, Yes, our culture is the oldest in the world. Bahaime is simply aboriginal for Creator. We worship nature in all it's glorious forms. Best wishes, Kay.
