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Be Kind

A simple philosophy

17 total reviews 
Comment from Dawn Munro
Exceptional
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Well, not only is this polished, flawless, it's touching and a philosophy that could, indeed, change the world. You have my last six for an essay that could only be written by someone who practices this philosophy, someone I hope I know! (Someone who inspires another step when some days it hardly seems worth the bother...)
Best of luck in the booth.

 Comment Written 24-May-2018


reply by the author on 24-May-2018
    Dawn, I am humbled by your incredibly kind words and wonderful review. Thanks so much, and I greatly appreciate the six stars. By the way, I love your pen name.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
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Great advise for all of us. In this world where social media is used to berate and shame people all the time, it is a good reminder that being kind can make a huge difference in our world and in just one life. Very well written. I saw no errors and I'm sure your son will grow to be a very wonderful man.

 Comment Written 24-May-2018


reply by the author on 24-May-2018
    Roxanna, thanks so much for your wonderful review and very kind words. I truly appreciate the six stars.
Comment from zanya
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Wow that final line is very striking - imagine if the world decided one fine day to do just that !!! 'spending spree of kindess'- the anecdote at the heart of this story is as a pebble in the water - and its ripple effect -

 Comment Written 23-May-2018


reply by the author on 24-May-2018
    Zanya, thanks very much for your very kind words and review.
Comment from Debbie Pope
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Hear, hear! The first thing that I posted at FanStory was a short 3 liner that said all I need is a kindly man. To me, that said everything that needed to be said, as does your essay. I would give it a six star rating if I had one. It deserves it for your insight. Thank you for this. Nothing else matters more than kindness.

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 Comment Written 23-May-2018


reply by the author on 24-May-2018
    Debbie, thanks very much for your wonderful review and very kind words.
Comment from aanneee
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I have absolutely no choice here but to give you a 6, you had me nodding all the way down your page , totally thrilled to read it as I so agree with you on this subject...that said I now need to hunt for some glue to stick my head back on.

Just so beautifully stated and I thank you for it...Dinah

 Comment Written 23-May-2018


reply by the author on 24-May-2018
    Dinah, thanks so much for the incredibly kind words and review. I truly appreciate the six stars.
Comment from kiwijenny
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Be kind is such great advice. I teach four year olds and I am constantly impressing that in them...I reward kindness and try to be kind myself
It's hard at times
I enjoyed this immensely
Well penned
God bless

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 Comment Written 23-May-2018


reply by the author on 24-May-2018
    Kiwijenny, thanks very much for the very kind words and review.
Comment from Alexander Vasa
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Wow, this was a very touching story. Fancy being that loving. I don't think I could do it. I love hearing about this sort of selflessness. It does your heart good to know there are people of this caliber out there. I noticed no errors and thanks for sharing this great story, which I found a pleasure to read and review, Ana.

 Comment Written 23-May-2018


reply by the author on 24-May-2018
    Ana, thanks for the wonderful six star review and very kind words. I truly appreciate the six stars. I agree, stories such as the baseball coach are truly inspiring and heartwarming.