Be Kind
A simple philosophy17 total reviews
Comment from w.j.debi
A spending spree of kindness. That is a wonderful thought.
You have an excellent philosophy of life and your present it so well in you ur essay. Your win is well deserved. Congratulations.
reply by the author on 29-May-2018
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A spending spree of kindness. That is a wonderful thought.
You have an excellent philosophy of life and your present it so well in you ur essay. Your win is well deserved. Congratulations.
Comment Written 28-May-2018
reply by the author on 29-May-2018
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Debi, thanks so much for the very kind words and review. Bill
Comment from Joy Graham
Hello Bananafish,
It is a pleasure to meet you and read your story today :) You have an inspiring story to tell for this contest entry, and I congratulate you on a fine winning entry. I came specifically to read the winning entry. I can relate to not wanting to give a speech. I have struggled with stage fright and couldn't finish my piano exams because of it. I was coming to terms with playing in front of small recitals and music festivals, but exams were my doom. I'm glad you were able to give a speech for your son. You have good things to say. Your voice should be heard more.
Sincerely Joy xx
reply by the author on 28-May-2018
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Hello Bananafish,
It is a pleasure to meet you and read your story today :) You have an inspiring story to tell for this contest entry, and I congratulate you on a fine winning entry. I came specifically to read the winning entry. I can relate to not wanting to give a speech. I have struggled with stage fright and couldn't finish my piano exams because of it. I was coming to terms with playing in front of small recitals and music festivals, but exams were my doom. I'm glad you were able to give a speech for your son. You have good things to say. Your voice should be heard more.
Sincerely Joy xx
Comment Written 28-May-2018
reply by the author on 28-May-2018
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Joy, thanks so much for the wonderful review and very kind words. I have always marveled at those who can get up on stage and perform in front of an audience. Sorry about your experiences with stage fright. I can certainly empathize. Thanks again. Bill
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Bananafish I think you deserve to get a 12 for this essay. And I agree with you if there were more people in the world like this Kidney donor if that type of compassion or to overtake the world. The World Won't Be far much in a better place or state because love would dominate. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 28-May-2018
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Bananafish I think you deserve to get a 12 for this essay. And I agree with you if there were more people in the world like this Kidney donor if that type of compassion or to overtake the world. The World Won't Be far much in a better place or state because love would dominate. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 28-May-2018
reply by the author on 28-May-2018
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Mary, thanks so much for the wonderful six star review. I truly appreciate the encouragement and very kind words. Bill
Comment from HaleyBel
I spent 13 years as a qualified nurse. I totally agree with you Compassion is a quality which needs to be seen more often. As the world becomes more Godless, the compassion reduces in the world. I felt compelled to say I agreed and I wish you well in this contest.
reply by the author on 28-May-2018
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I spent 13 years as a qualified nurse. I totally agree with you Compassion is a quality which needs to be seen more often. As the world becomes more Godless, the compassion reduces in the world. I felt compelled to say I agreed and I wish you well in this contest.
Comment Written 27-May-2018
reply by the author on 28-May-2018
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Haley, thanks very much for the six star review and encouragement. I truly appreciate it. Bill
Comment from RFL
There is a quote, attributed to Leonardo Da Vinci, which states, "The greatest sophistication is simplicity." I also learned that lesson as an undergraduate in an English course. We were to analyze a story. The professor gave me a "C". During class we analyzed the story, and I realized that I had covered every point correctly. When I asked the professor why I got a "C". He said, "Because you are not writing like you." So, why am I telling you all this? Because you have told a wonderful story to match your admirable philosophy in simple, yet sophisticated style. You are you. God bless! I think it is wonderful. Best of luck in the contest, Rona
reply by the author on 28-May-2018
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There is a quote, attributed to Leonardo Da Vinci, which states, "The greatest sophistication is simplicity." I also learned that lesson as an undergraduate in an English course. We were to analyze a story. The professor gave me a "C". During class we analyzed the story, and I realized that I had covered every point correctly. When I asked the professor why I got a "C". He said, "Because you are not writing like you." So, why am I telling you all this? Because you have told a wonderful story to match your admirable philosophy in simple, yet sophisticated style. You are you. God bless! I think it is wonderful. Best of luck in the contest, Rona
Comment Written 27-May-2018
reply by the author on 28-May-2018
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Rona, thanks so much for your wonderful review and extremely kind words. I had never heard that da Vinci quote before. Thanks for sharing, and thanks again for the encouragement. Bill.
Comment from Mame
What a terrific message here and the world certainly needs more of it. In our secular world we seem to be ignoring the messages that go to make up harmony in our society. What a perfect way for the son to celebrate entry into manhood.
reply by the author on 26-May-2018
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What a terrific message here and the world certainly needs more of it. In our secular world we seem to be ignoring the messages that go to make up harmony in our society. What a perfect way for the son to celebrate entry into manhood.
Comment Written 26-May-2018
reply by the author on 26-May-2018
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Mame, thanks so much for your wonderful review.
Comment from giraffmang
I liked this piece. It has a clear strong message. One of kindness and hope. Well-written too.
There's a lot of evidence to suggest that Ghandi was a wife-beater and a racist. Likewise a lot of money seemed to go missing from Mother Teresa's organisation and she pushed the Catholicism a lot too...
reply by the author on 25-May-2018
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I liked this piece. It has a clear strong message. One of kindness and hope. Well-written too.
There's a lot of evidence to suggest that Ghandi was a wife-beater and a racist. Likewise a lot of money seemed to go missing from Mother Teresa's organisation and she pushed the Catholicism a lot too...
Comment Written 25-May-2018
reply by the author on 25-May-2018
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Thanks very much, Gman, for the very kind review.
I have heard about the accusations of racism against Gandhi, but I wasn't aware that he was also accused of wife-beating. I also wasn't aware of Mother Teresa's finacial improprieties, but I did know that there have been suggestions of other less than saintly things about her. I also know that she went through prolonged periods in which she had serious and traumatic doubts about her Catholicism and God.
We are such a flawed species, aren't we, that even the seemingly most virtuous among us turn out to be seriously flawed individuals?
Thanks again, for reading my essay!
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But as writers it makes for a very interesting dynamic.
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It certainly does.
Comment from Swampfox1
Very well described and good luck in the contest. I can relate to the anxiety of public speaking. The writing flows well, I did not see any errors. Truly a great job. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-May-2018
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Very well described and good luck in the contest. I can relate to the anxiety of public speaking. The writing flows well, I did not see any errors. Truly a great job. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 25-May-2018
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Swampfox, thanks very much for the very kind review.
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you're welcome
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Author,
Lovely. I think this piece is really well-written and has a great chance to win this contest. It is simple, succinct and to the point - and the message is so needed today when so many people seem to see only the negative side of things. Thank you for sharing and much luck to you!
reply by the author on 25-May-2018
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Dear Mystery Author,
Lovely. I think this piece is really well-written and has a great chance to win this contest. It is simple, succinct and to the point - and the message is so needed today when so many people seem to see only the negative side of things. Thank you for sharing and much luck to you!
Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 25-May-2018
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Robyn, thanks so much for the wonderful review and kind words.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Thank you for sharing this slice of your life. How wonderful that you could overcome a phobia and summon inner strength to support your son on his special day.
Your story is well told and I wish you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thank you for sharing this slice of your life. How wonderful that you could overcome a phobia and summon inner strength to support your son on his special day.
Your story is well told and I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Mustangpatty, thanks very much for the kind words and review.
