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April NaPoWriMo NationalPoetcontest

Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "I'm Glad You Are My Mother"
Daily poems for April 2018

42 total reviews 
Comment from Liberty Justice
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What loving caring descriptions of your family members and friends. You give such glowing reviews and thanks to all who you love. Your rhymes are musical and flow down the page with so much love and caring. EXCELLENT. liberty justice

 Comment Written 02-May-2018


reply by the author on 04-May-2018
    Thank you very much for your review sorry for late reply. I enjoyed writing this one and mean every word. So Thanks for your time to read and review Cheers Christine
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
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This is a wonderful tribute to family. So many are fractured these days, children don't even know who their fathers are, so it is always great to hear of a whole family that know and love one another.

 Comment Written 02-May-2018


reply by the author on 04-May-2018
    Hi Roxanne, Thank ypu very much for your review Ms am very lucky I have a great family amd friends all whom mean so much and yes we do love one and another Cheers to you Christine
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, I'm Glad You Are My Mother, opens the sound board up for the Dad, siblings, friends, kids and even grandchildren. Important message as well, to let them know.

 Comment Written 02-May-2018


reply by the author on 04-May-2018
    Hi Bill, Thanks for your review I am fortunate to have it all and enjoy all my blessing in life Cheers Christine
Comment from ameen786
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Hello Christine and thank you for sharing this awesome dedication to family, this beautiful/meaningful poem where you have done justice to each loved one; should resonate with readers.

 Comment Written 02-May-2018


reply by the author on 04-May-2018
    Hi ameen786 Thank you for reading my poem and I am pleased you found this worthy of review I am a lucky woman And have so much to be grateful for Have a lovely day Cheers Christine
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi there;

Thank you for sharing this very positive and affirming view of life.

I congratulate you on finishing the NaPo. It takes a great deal of commitment to create a worthy poem each day.


 Comment Written 02-May-2018


reply by the author on 04-May-2018
    Hi Patty, Thank you for your review and as busy I was with a daily poem I enjoyed this challenge and had fun creating a new one every day and yes I do have a positive outlook and feel grateful for all mu good fortune Cheers Christine
Comment from Joy Graham
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This is a lovely poem dedicated to your family, Chrissy :) I enjoyed your 8/6/8/6 quatrains which you have doubled up. Great abcb rhyme scheme that adds to the flow. I think you are so fortunate to have a book of your father's poetry to read. That's such an amazing gift to have. My son in law has his dad's journals that he enjoys reading to keep memories and family stories alive for generations to come. Congratulations on posting your final poem in this challenge. Well done.

Joy xx

 Comment Written 02-May-2018


reply by the author on 04-May-2018
    Hi Joy, Thank you and sorry for late reply, and yes my Dad was a terrific poet and it is nice to nave his work he brpught much joy to many. it is nice to keep something to ne able to hand on . Cheers for your congratulations and this was a great challenge Cheers Christine
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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"I'm Glad You Are My Mother", is an exceptionally well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a delight to both read and review. This is a six, but unfortunately I only have fives left. I look forward to reading your next post.

 Comment Written 02-May-2018


reply by the author on 04-May-2018
    Hi duchessofdrumborg. Thank you for your review amd lovely comments. I appreciate your review and send apolgies for late reply Cheers to you and next on one the way. Cheers Christine.
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
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This was very heartfelt and touching. I enjoyed and loved how thankful you were for each person...mom, dad, husband, children, grandchildren, and friends. When we start to be grateful, it's amazing how much we can love our life.

 Comment Written 01-May-2018


reply by the author on 04-May-2018
    Hi Cindy, Thank youand ai am pleased ypu enjoyed my post and yes love is the key to a happy life Sorry for late reply Cheers Christine
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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This is an awesome and well written poem that talks about the many levels of family. You've done a superb job in presenting this.I really like the way that you describe this from mother on down. Great job Chrissy. Well done.

 Comment Written 01-May-2018


reply by the author on 04-May-2018
    Hi Jeffrey. Thanls for your review a d sorry for the late reply. I enjoyed writing this and like to acknowledge all in my life who make it so great Cheers Christine
Comment from Roxanne56
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What a wonderful tribute to your mom and family. Such loving and kind words. I'm so glad you will be giving this to your mom on Mother's Day. We often wait too late to tell them how much they mean to us and what a great job they have done. I was blessed to let my mom know how much I loved and appreciate her before she passed and I knew she loved me just as much. Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful poem. I hope you and your mom have a Blessed Mother's Day. GOD Bless you both :)

 Comment Written 01-May-2018


reply by the author on 04-May-2018
    Hi Roxanne, Thank you for reading my poem and for your fantastic review and rating of a six star. I am looking forward to my giving this to my Mum for Mothers day and yes ai love her company and we share a special bond. I am pleased ypu enjoyed my poem and Thank you so much Sorry for the late reply Have a great day Cheers Christine
reply by Roxanne56 on 04-May-2018
    You are quite welcome and most deserving :)