Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This twenty-syllable poem, The Questioning Kiss, has the searching lips seeking whatever soft skin responds best to the systematic advancement to the horizontal bop.

 Comment Written 05-May-2018

Comment from nordicgirl

Excellent

Wow. It's about Damn time you wrote something beautiful. Damn, I was beginning to think you'd killed off the few brain cells you had left. Hehehe! Now your talking, Michael. Please, a few more like this. NG

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018

Ahh. Well, you know I'm retired and just piddling around under cover now. I guess I have an occasional something here and there that's semi-worthwhile if you say so. Thank you. :)) michael

Comment from Mary Hollingsworth

Excellent

Well what follows that kiss writer, I won't tell if you won't. Somethings just are not meant to be discussed beyond the the twosts of lips that kisses. Lol

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018

So pleased you got the tone of this exactly as I hoped. Thanks a million, Mary. :)) mike

reply by Mary Hollingsworth on 26-Apr-2018

Mike my pleasure

Comment from Miriam Collins

Excellent

I love how your words sort of melt along and captivates your readers! I love how you wrote "bodies meld", and how you left the last line with, "oh, what follows..." you reveal so much but yet theirs still a little secret. Great job!

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018

Music to my ears. These are exactly the words I was hoping to hear. You made my evening. Thanks a million. :)) mike

Comment from Gloria ....

Exceptional

This is tres magnifique, Mav, and now I have to go and look if I've entered this contest, because Ima have to up my game here with this amazing twenty syllable entry.

I think everything about this beauty is the epitome of art and sensuality intertwined into a beautiful piece of art.

Best of luck to you. :)

Ange

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018

Well, I hope YOU aren't in this contest. I hope to have a chance. LOL

Thanks soooo much. Wow, what wonderful words to hear. I'll take them as a win and let the chips fall were they may. :))

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Such a romantic poem where you have shown the draw and pull of attraction. The cascading format effect supports the words of how two people fall into an embrace. Well done.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018

I'm so pleased you enjoyed and understood my intent fully. Thanks so much. :))

Comment from royowen

Excellent

What an excellent entry in this 20 syllable poetry contest. You've achieved a qualifying entry, and a darn good one as well. Excellent presentation, a great theme, a popular one. Bur good, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018

Thanks so much, Roy. High compliments indeed. I appreciate the kind words and encouragement. :))

reply by royowen on 25-Apr-2018

Welcome

Comment from Harry Smith

Excellent

Exceptional selection of picture that more than complimented the exceptionally well written 5-7-5 poem that is very powerful and will do real good in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018

Ha! You've reviewed too many 5-7-5s today, Harry. LOL In any case, I appreciate the kind words and good luck wishes. Lots of great entries, so I'll need them. :))

Comment from Alexander Vasa

Excellent

Hello, lovely poem. Very romantic and I enjoyed the formatting and picture, which work so well for the poetry. I noticed no errors and I see you've had trouble with the FS editor, I have seen the blank boxes you speak of, so if it's happened to you, it's a good idea to do what you've done and re-write it out for the reader.


Thanks for sharing your poetry, Ana.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018

Thanks so much, Ana. There isn't usually a problem. But once in a while with an embedded piece like this, there device isn't able to read it for some reason. So I add the words in the notes, just in case. So pleased you enjoyed. Thanks so much. :))

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

a great little love poem, romantic and emotionally passionate. the 'fanciness' of the font and the black screen did make it a little tough to read, but I got it......meeshu

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018

Sorry it was difficult to read. Sometimes it can be with these embedded pieces depending on your device. I appreciate your extra effort in reading it. AND I'm so pleased you did enjoy it. Thanks a million. :))