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April NaPoWriMo NationalPoetcontest

Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Rainbow Bright"
Daily poems for April 2018

19 total reviews 
Comment from misscookie
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I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem
'm so behind in reading
yet I'm trying my best to read them all
I love the words to your poem
and the message is so real
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
    Hi Cookie, Thank for reading and reviewing my poem and it was a great day with two rainbows my students are doing great and I enjoy their learning and teaching them. Cheers Christine
reply by misscookie on 16-Apr-2018
    I use to help with the girl scouts and summer bible school arts and craft, I know that wonderful relationship and feeing we teachers get
    .You're very welcome , have a nice week
    Cookie
Comment from Ogden
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Your poem is very well-written, Christine, describing your busy day pleasantly and explicitly, with excellent rhyming and imagery.

G'day,

Don (Ogden)

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
    Hi Don. Thank you so much for your review for my Rainbow Bright and I do apologise for the late reply Much appreciation for your support G'day back Cheers Christine
Comment from Angela Post
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I enjoyed your poem. Great storytelling about your work with your students. I liked how you mention the rainbow at the beginning and you describe your students as your "rainbow bright" at the end.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
    Hi Angela Thank you for reviewing my poem for Rainbow Bright and apology for late reply. They were like my rainbow at the end of the day and thought it fitting to acknowledge them Cheers Christine
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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This was an excellent way to incorporate the rainbow into your daily work activity. You paint a beautiful picture for the reader, then, you write it all out superbly. I enjoyed reading this. Well done Chrissy!

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
    Thank you Jeffrey Your lovely review is appreciated Cheers Christine
Comment from BeasPeas
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Kudos to you, Christine. That is a very tough job. Your poem reflects the importance of a good teacher in the healthcare environment especially and your fans learned a little more about you. Well written. I enjoyed reading this. Marilyn

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
    Hi Marilyn Thank so much and it was a good day we all worked well and the raonbow wasxa lovely start Cheers Christine
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a beautiful write about your colourful knowledge being passed onto students with a positivity, taking the clinical white and filling it with colour, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
    hi Dolly Thank you and we all had a good day the students are a good bunch Cheers Christine
Comment from lyenochka
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Thanks for sharing your wonderful work with us in verse! I am so glad you get to mentor future nurses. I was a little unsure what the poem would be about because "Rainbow Brite" was a children's character but of course, it's not "Bright." Glad you had the rainbows with the rain.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
    Hi lyenochka Thanks for your review and yes my daughter had a rainbow brite still has and she is 38 LOL No this was a brigjt rainbow like my students Cheers Christine
Comment from Gloria ....
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Very nicely written, Christine. I have deep admiration for teachers and particularly a nurse educator.

That said, a perfectly written poem and a great to introduced your job.

The NaPo is coming right along.

Thank you for sharing.

Gloria

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
    hi Gloria Thanks very much and it is a rewarding job and the students are a good bunch Cheers Christine
Comment from Susan B. Lamphier
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Christine--You have such a musical way with your poems. This was particularly clever. I liked the way you presented the entirety of your day, from rainbow, to bright minds, eager to learn. Well done!

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
    Hi Susan Thanks for reading and recoewongcmu poem and I am glad tou enjoyed my musical flow Cheers Christine
Comment from ameen786
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What a great teacher you are my friend, thank you for sharing this wonderful poem in excellent rhymes creating a beautiful imagery; a delightful read.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
    Hi ameen786 Thanks forclooking in on my poem and for your lovely review Cheers Christine