Poisonous frogs.
Short story, inspired by a television program.21 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
The picture is beautiful and your piece is well written and well told.
It's amazing to see the variety of wildlife on our planet in the many corners.
Thank you for sharing this interesting bit of information with us.
Sharon
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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The picture is beautiful and your piece is well written and well told.
It's amazing to see the variety of wildlife on our planet in the many corners.
Thank you for sharing this interesting bit of information with us.
Sharon
Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
Comment from c_lucas
Some edible foods have poison cousins. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery and descriptive schemes.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Some edible foods have poison cousins. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery and descriptive schemes.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
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You're welcome, Ine.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
How interesting that they kill eat other, and eat each other too, since you called them cannibals? I guess their poisons don't affect other frogs, but they DO affect us. I would never want to live in the tropics. Not just fear of poisonous and other dangerous animals, but the heat and humidity would be unbearable.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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How interesting that they kill eat other, and eat each other too, since you called them cannibals? I guess their poisons don't affect other frogs, but they DO affect us. I would never want to live in the tropics. Not just fear of poisonous and other dangerous animals, but the heat and humidity would be unbearable.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
Comment from Ulla
Hello Ine, A good write about a frog, that does mainly kill within their speciecis. That at least is a relief. Then we don't have to feel threatened. All the best. Ulla;))
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Hello Ine, A good write about a frog, that does mainly kill within their speciecis. That at least is a relief. Then we don't have to feel threatened. All the best. Ulla;))
Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
Comment from Rasmine
Hello, Robina, :)
Many very (either 'many' or 'very') brightly coloured frogs are spread all over the world. But that they kill each other places them in the cannibal corner (Maybe reword this, for example 'They kill and eat each other putting them in the cannibal category').
I am trying to vent my anger right now! :P Damn banks!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Hello, Robina, :)
Many very (either 'many' or 'very') brightly coloured frogs are spread all over the world. But that they kill each other places them in the cannibal corner (Maybe reword this, for example 'They kill and eat each other putting them in the cannibal category').
I am trying to vent my anger right now! :P Damn banks!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A very interesting write Robina and I enjoyed all the information about these frogs which are a little scary and wouldn't like to cross swords with one of them! Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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A very interesting write Robina and I enjoyed all the information about these frogs which are a little scary and wouldn't like to cross swords with one of them! Love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
Comment from Katie Solis
Good job with the summary. I appreciate the report. In the second paragraph, humans should be plural. The second to last paragraph has a sentence that begins with "but" that needs to be resolved, maybe because they kill each other, it places them in the canibal corner. Good picture that went with your work, and good warning.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Good job with the summary. I appreciate the report. In the second paragraph, humans should be plural. The second to last paragraph has a sentence that begins with "but" that needs to be resolved, maybe because they kill each other, it places them in the canibal corner. Good picture that went with your work, and good warning.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week. Thanks for the tip
Comment from Henry King
Even while this is a very true story about colorful cute frogs which are deadly. You can say the same thing about colorful beautiful cars which are more deadly than frogs.
There needs to be something more compelling than a picture of a pretty frog and saying a few of words about it being deadly, qualified by you saying I saw it on TV.
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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Even while this is a very true story about colorful cute frogs which are deadly. You can say the same thing about colorful beautiful cars which are more deadly than frogs.
There needs to be something more compelling than a picture of a pretty frog and saying a few of words about it being deadly, qualified by you saying I saw it on TV.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Thanks.
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You are welcome
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the poisonous frogs (anuras) are really cute and bright in colours, though their poison can kill man, but we make medicines using poisons; well written, well done. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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This speaks the poisonous frogs (anuras) are really cute and bright in colours, though their poison can kill man, but we make medicines using poisons; well written, well done. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week. You are very right, I forgot tp mention iit somewhere.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I found you post to be very interesting. I teach first grade and my little boys are fascinated by the poisonous tree frog.
But that they kill each other places them in the cannibal corner. (omit the 'that')
I ventilate my anger a little bit. (ventilated, it needs to be past tense.)
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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I found you post to be very interesting. I teach first grade and my little boys are fascinated by the poisonous tree frog.
But that they kill each other places them in the cannibal corner. (omit the 'that')
I ventilate my anger a little bit. (ventilated, it needs to be past tense.)
Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week. I will change.
