Little Poems
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Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing the Amanda Pinch form, especially since I am enamored with alliteration. I relished your photograph of the statue that inspired you. I admired your rhymes and quote, and found the piece a compelling ekphrastic poem. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
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Thank you for sharing the Amanda Pinch form, especially since I am enamored with alliteration. I relished your photograph of the statue that inspired you. I admired your rhymes and quote, and found the piece a compelling ekphrastic poem. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 01-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
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Thank you Joan. Hope the pinch didn't hurt. Lol. Glad you found the alliteration and the statue compelling. As you ekphrasticism is my thing.
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Not at all--I savored the whole ensemble. More cheers Joan
Comment from damommy
I like your interpretation of the sculpture. This looks very complicated, but you're a master at those.
Good internal rhyming. It appears you've done the form justice.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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I like your interpretation of the sculpture. This looks very complicated, but you're a master at those.
Good internal rhyming. It appears you've done the form justice.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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Thank you damommy. That's very uplifting.
Comment from Pantygynt
Well I am not surprised she is looking upset. She appears to have lost her bra! What is more it looks as if her skirt will shortly follow. The structure reminds me somewhat of my symmetrina.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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Well I am not surprised she is looking upset. She appears to have lost her bra! What is more it looks as if her skirt will shortly follow. The structure reminds me somewhat of my symmetrina.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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Hah! My thoughts exactly concerning her attire. Yes, I think the format is similar to several other forms I've seen. Your symmetrina is certainly one..
Comment from Liberty Justice
She breached the sky in leaping hurl? Looks like a stone monument of a frustrated girl who jumped off a ledge. Indeed, life will get you down by hurling all of its problems at you, and these times will make you "JUMP." Glad I ain't jumped! liberty justice
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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She breached the sky in leaping hurl? Looks like a stone monument of a frustrated girl who jumped off a ledge. Indeed, life will get you down by hurling all of its problems at you, and these times will make you "JUMP." Glad I ain't jumped! liberty justice
Comment Written 25-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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Thank you Liberty. I'm glad you aint jumped too. Lol.
Comment from donette1914
very interesting statue in Minnesota, I thought you did a very good job of a person in distress, and your interpretation it for this poem. thank you for sharing it was a pleasure
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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very interesting statue in Minnesota, I thought you did a very good job of a person in distress, and your interpretation it for this poem. thank you for sharing it was a pleasure
Comment Written 25-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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Thank you donette, for taking the time to review and comment on my poem.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Amanda's pinch poem about a very u iqur statue of the girl in the Sculpture park. It seemsvthat she protect herself from the elements of nature all in vain.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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A very well-written Amanda's pinch poem about a very u iqur statue of the girl in the Sculpture park. It seemsvthat she protect herself from the elements of nature all in vain.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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Thank you Sandra. Yes, very good point.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks a socially victimized girl was never given justice; she left for good; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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This speaks a socially victimized girl was never given justice; she left for good; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 25-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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Thank you Alcreator. Will do. I appreciate the review.
Comment from tfawcus
You seem to be able to conjure up new forms from a limitless store! This is another that I've not heard of! This is an interesting interpretation of the attitude struck in this statue. The addition of in-line rhyming to supplement the alliteration gives a haunting feel to the poem.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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You seem to be able to conjure up new forms from a limitless store! This is another that I've not heard of! This is an interesting interpretation of the attitude struck in this statue. The addition of in-line rhyming to supplement the alliteration gives a haunting feel to the poem.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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Thank you Tony. Yes, I found quite a store of them on the AllPoetry site. I'm picking some that I find most interesting. I am pleased that you like my interpretation and picked up on the in-line rhyme addition.
Comment from samantha0930
The poem is good, but it starts me out confused in the first line, since it feels like there's words missing in order to fit the syllable count. The rest reads fine, but as many times as I re-read the first line, I still can't understand it.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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The poem is good, but it starts me out confused in the first line, since it feels like there's words missing in order to fit the syllable count. The rest reads fine, but as many times as I re-read the first line, I still can't understand it.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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Thank you Samantha. I was referring to the swirling wind, as well as the swirling thoughts in her head, as her world was crashing in on her. I hope that helps.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It's funny how a statue can bring forth such thoughts and then fall into the words on a page when a poet sets eyes on these subjects, your imagination ran wild here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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It's funny how a statue can bring forth such thoughts and then fall into the words on a page when a poet sets eyes on these subjects, your imagination ran wild here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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Thank you Dolly. I try to give it free reign.Lol. I appreciate your uplifting comments.
