Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I made a short trip to San Francisco and have fallen way behind, but I am glad I caught your post.

I admired your reflections about who you are and your echoing sounds throughout to add intensity. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2018

Yeah, I guess we all see some of these reflections living our lives. Glad aspects of this write was found pleasing. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching words.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks what not everything the poet wishes, dreams to do and become, knows all would not come into reality; we love dreaming; well said, well done. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018

This write inspired by roommate, young lad constant dream changing, seeking his final course in life. Thanking you for your generous rate and splendid views.

Comment from Trudi Perkins

Excellent

This is an interesting poem indeed. I really enjoyed this. It flowed smoothly while I was reading it out loud. Thanks for sharing your craft with us.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018

Glad to hear a write without a mentioned flow, I know they're there. Thanking you for your generous rate and comforting comments.