Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Shirley, I am so sorry my sweet friend...I hope there will be a time God will ease your pain...your poem is very well written...but so very said...love your poem...and love your picture...Love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018

Thanks Linda,
I am doing okay but it's an ongoing task to empty the emotional refuse bin so the sun can shine in.
:-) Shirley

reply by l.raven on 22-Jan-2018

it has been like that for me lately as well...but all will be well...you are so welcome Shirley...smiling back at you...Love xxoo

Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

This is a very powerful poem. Strong word choice, lets us feel your hurt, sorrow. It also delivers several powerful messages. I especially liked the part where you said you'll never walk alone.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018

Thanks so much for a lovely review.
I appreciate your time.
:-) Shirley

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hello!
Very moving. Your writing is emotive and honest. You speak not only from experience but from the depths of your very soul. You draw your reader in = not an easy achievement. Well-crafted and memorable.

Best Wishes,
diane

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018

Thanks so much Diane,
I appreciate your review.
:-) Shirley