Pie in the Sky
5-7-5 Contest Entry7 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Even though Melania is in the photograph, I did not anticipate your final line! I admired your making your point in this short form and your use of quotes. Best wishes in the contest and good luck to all of us! -Joan
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Even though Melania is in the photograph, I did not anticipate your final line! I admired your making your point in this short form and your use of quotes. Best wishes in the contest and good luck to all of us! -Joan
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your insightful comments, Joan. The contest ended with FS voters not sharing our views, or indifferent to them. My frequent anti-Trump posts have not been well-received, but I'm not deterred. Let's hope for better results in the national voting. I believe the tide is turning. Thanks again.
Don
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I have noticed a very conservative streak among FanStorians, except for ameen, but I will keep my fingers crossed that the "tide is turning". Sighs- Joan
Comment from persevere
This is a clever interpretation of the attached picture. You 5-7-5 obeys the required syllable count and flows smoothly. I wish you luck in the contest.
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This is a clever interpretation of the attached picture. You 5-7-5 obeys the required syllable count and flows smoothly. I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2018
Comment from Dean Kuch
Oh...my...goodness. I have a feeling you are gonna take some flak for this one, Anonymous Poet.
You won't get any from me however. I couldn't agree more with what you've written in your 5-7-5 contest entry. In fact, I wish you luck!
~Dean
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Oh...my...goodness. I have a feeling you are gonna take some flak for this one, Anonymous Poet.
You won't get any from me however. I couldn't agree more with what you've written in your 5-7-5 contest entry. In fact, I wish you luck!
~Dean
Comment Written 18-Jan-2018
Comment from RodG
What a terrific pairing of photo and poem. How that lovely lady can even LOOK at that ass is beyond me. Your poem does make us wonder what the First Lady must be thinking of HIM whenever he tweets.
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What a terrific pairing of photo and poem. How that lovely lady can even LOOK at that ass is beyond me. Your poem does make us wonder what the First Lady must be thinking of HIM whenever he tweets.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2018
Comment from Sharon Haiste
A good 5-7-5 poem with a clear and very true message.
It's truly a sad state of affairs that this joker is in control of the most powerful nation in the world.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Sharon
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A good 5-7-5 poem with a clear and very true message.
It's truly a sad state of affairs that this joker is in control of the most powerful nation in the world.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Sharon
Comment Written 18-Jan-2018
Comment from James H. Oldfield
Very well illustrated, though is suspect you'd a plethora of images to choose from :)
Excellent, a very well worded, well constructed 5/7/5.
Best of luck in the contest.
Take care.
-James
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Very well illustrated, though is suspect you'd a plethora of images to choose from :)
Excellent, a very well worded, well constructed 5/7/5.
Best of luck in the contest.
Take care.
-James
Comment Written 18-Jan-2018
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A look can say it all can't it? Mr Trump can't hide his emotions can he? This is actually what I like about him, he is no diplomat and you can usually tell what he is thinking, which is unusual for someone in politics, your write is food for thought, love Dolly x
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A look can say it all can't it? Mr Trump can't hide his emotions can he? This is actually what I like about him, he is no diplomat and you can usually tell what he is thinking, which is unusual for someone in politics, your write is food for thought, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Jan-2018