We Wait for Grandma
waiting patiently3 total reviews
Comment from Alec Gould
Very nice my friend. The words flowed from one line to the next, finishing in a very nice way. I could feel the "feeling of the words". Thank you for sharing! ~Alec
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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Very nice my friend. The words flowed from one line to the next, finishing in a very nice way. I could feel the "feeling of the words". Thank you for sharing! ~Alec
Comment Written 18-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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Thanks, Alec, for your comments. I appreciate your reading and responding.
Comment from Trudi Perkins
I really loved this. I love the sentiment of your poem.I would sit and wait for my grandmother for hours.I adored my grandmother she was an extraordinary woman.Well written .Great job! Thanks for sharing this with us.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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I really loved this. I love the sentiment of your poem.I would sit and wait for my grandmother for hours.I adored my grandmother she was an extraordinary woman.Well written .Great job! Thanks for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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Trudi, Thanks so much for your comments and your "six stars". I do appreciate the boost. elaine
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello!
And what a wonderful memory to have whether waiting for Grandma or not!
Your 5/7/5 offering is well-crafted and is relatable to the reader on so many levels. How I wish my grandfathers were still alive to be able to sit with them.
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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Hello!
And what a wonderful memory to have whether waiting for Grandma or not!
Your 5/7/5 offering is well-crafted and is relatable to the reader on so many levels. How I wish my grandfathers were still alive to be able to sit with them.
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much for your comments. I appreciate your response. elaine