This Time - That Time 2
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Gwendolyn's Despair"Veronica is sent back again
37 total reviews
Comment from Joy Graham
This is such a heart breaking story. The perfect way to get your readers hooked on this book lol! You are talented and crafty :) I mean that in a good way. I'm thinking somebody paid off the baby's father to go away.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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This is such a heart breaking story. The perfect way to get your readers hooked on this book lol! You are talented and crafty :) I mean that in a good way. I'm thinking somebody paid off the baby's father to go away.
Joy xx
Comment Written 29-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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I'm not saying anything, it will spoil the ending for you. Gwendolyn suffered a lot at the hands of her brother and the moron she was to marry. Sir John did love his sister, but had a problem with the boy, and of course, if it got out, their name would be ruined. The upper class would never allow that to happen. Thanks again, my dear friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from artisart4u
Your chapter is nice about women and men having second thoughts. They can go through life thinking "what if."
I can always find the time to read story about a marriage.
Congratulations on all your win and reconizations.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
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Your chapter is nice about women and men having second thoughts. They can go through life thinking "what if."
I can always find the time to read story about a marriage.
Congratulations on all your win and reconizations.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
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Thank you, Artisart, for your nice review and for the lovely 6 stars! And thank you for the congratulations, I really appreciate that! xx Sandra
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
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Comment Written 16-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
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Thank you so much! :) xx
Comment from rwilliam
OH NO! SHe's back in her own time...How is she going to help this poor baby?
WOW, this is so much fun to read. I don't mind 'binge' reading AT ALL ! :-D
Your story is alive in my imagination and I'm enjoying this 'movie' very much.
Bravo!!
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2017
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OH NO! SHe's back in her own time...How is she going to help this poor baby?
WOW, this is so much fun to read. I don't mind 'binge' reading AT ALL ! :-D
Your story is alive in my imagination and I'm enjoying this 'movie' very much.
Bravo!!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2017
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Another SIX!!! You have spoiled me so much with your wonderful reviews and all those 6 stars, Rebecca! You have to be one really lovely lady! Thank you! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from pbomar1115
Well, Veronica does not have to worry much about Gwendolyn. Gwendolyn has more sense than what everyone gives her credit. I even thought she was going to let her brother and Randolph walk all over her. Good for Gwendolyn.
Phillip
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Well, Veronica does not have to worry much about Gwendolyn. Gwendolyn has more sense than what everyone gives her credit. I even thought she was going to let her brother and Randolph walk all over her. Good for Gwendolyn.
Phillip
Comment Written 06-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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You are so right, Phillip, Gwendolyn has found an inner strength that probably shook her as well, lol. Thank you so much, my friend, for another lovely review. Big hugs. Sandra xxx
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Your story is so easy to read that it's my pleasure, Sandra.
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Cousin.
I'm way behind at the moment. Sorry about that.
"By the time I arrived at the missionary church, I was cold, distressed, and felt so sick...'" (And covered in mud. Lol.)
"covered in mud, and soaked through." (See! Told ya!)
"He said I was too late, and that Jacob had up and left the previous morning." (Ah, darn it!)
" 'There was nothing I could do but go home. I was in a lot of trouble, but I didn't care." (Beautifully tragic. Well done.)
'Serves him right!' I told her. 'Perhaps if he'd let you choose who you wanted to marry, this wouldn't have happened.' (I concur! Jerk!)
" Gwendolyn looked as though she'd been slapped on(in) the face,"
'Then you should know that love is blind to all the obstacles that present themselves.' (For sure I know that.)
Wow, you are so good at this writing caper, mate.
Another beautiful chapter, very touching and packed with emotion.
Let's hope this helps them along.
Delia says "Kumusta" (Hi.)
Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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G'day Cousin.
I'm way behind at the moment. Sorry about that.
"By the time I arrived at the missionary church, I was cold, distressed, and felt so sick...'" (And covered in mud. Lol.)
"covered in mud, and soaked through." (See! Told ya!)
"He said I was too late, and that Jacob had up and left the previous morning." (Ah, darn it!)
" 'There was nothing I could do but go home. I was in a lot of trouble, but I didn't care." (Beautifully tragic. Well done.)
'Serves him right!' I told her. 'Perhaps if he'd let you choose who you wanted to marry, this wouldn't have happened.' (I concur! Jerk!)
" Gwendolyn looked as though she'd been slapped on(in) the face,"
'Then you should know that love is blind to all the obstacles that present themselves.' (For sure I know that.)
Wow, you are so good at this writing caper, mate.
Another beautiful chapter, very touching and packed with emotion.
Let's hope this helps them along.
Delia says "Kumusta" (Hi.)
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 06-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Hi, my favourite cousin!! Thank you for another of your wonderful reviews that always give me a chuckle! I laughed at the 'covered in mud!' You are such fun. Thank you for another of your beautiful 6 stars, you really are sooooo nice! Big hugs, dear Fez. :) xxx Sandra. xxx
ps. Thanks for picking up my error. :) xxxxxx
Comment from mbroyles2
Simply amazing story you have going once again!
I just ordered your book from Amazon I can't wait to get it and read the first story in this series. I got in on the very last of it.
This story carries on so well and I love how you can jump back and forth through time and draw us in every time.
Michael
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
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Simply amazing story you have going once again!
I just ordered your book from Amazon I can't wait to get it and read the first story in this series. I got in on the very last of it.
This story carries on so well and I love how you can jump back and forth through time and draw us in every time.
Michael
Comment Written 06-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
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What a lovely review and all those lovely stars, thank you so much, my dear friend. That is so nice of you to order my book. I've had a wonderful couple of days. A reporter came to see me and then sent a photographer to take loads of photos of me and my book. She is doing a big spread in a paper and has approached some big magazines she edits for, and I am bing featured in the February edition of 'Hampshire Living' magazine. I'm really enjoying this. You will have all this and more when your book comes out, Michael, it's so exciting. Thank you again, dear friend. xxxSandra
Comment from F. Wehr3
Nice work on this part, Sandra. I've so enjoyed Veronica's adventures back and forth through time. Can't wait to see where you're headed next.
Take care,
Russell
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Nice work on this part, Sandra. I've so enjoyed Veronica's adventures back and forth through time. Can't wait to see where you're headed next.
Take care,
Russell
Comment Written 06-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Veronica has to put her detective head on now, that will be interesting! :) Thank you so much, my friend. I'm really pleased you are still enjoying this story. Big hugs! :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Dawn Munro
I am gobsmacked, honest-to-heavens astounded, my friend. I can't remember EVER dropping in on a chapter so OBVIOUSLY part of a complicated, intriguing plot, but feeling like I've just been treated to a marvelous story in, and of, itself.
Sandra, this is outstanding! I WISH I had a six for you!!!!!!!!!!!
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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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I am gobsmacked, honest-to-heavens astounded, my friend. I can't remember EVER dropping in on a chapter so OBVIOUSLY part of a complicated, intriguing plot, but feeling like I've just been treated to a marvelous story in, and of, itself.
Sandra, this is outstanding! I WISH I had a six for you!!!!!!!!!!!
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Comment Written 06-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Awww, thank you, Dawn! That is so nice of you. What a review to wake up to. Thank you my friend. Big hugs winging its way to you! xxx sandra
Comment from alexisleech
Poor Gwendolyn. Just when she finds someone to tell her story, she ups and bloody disappears! Joking apart, you crafted this chapter beautifully. The images you created left this reader in no doubt Gwen did the right thing, leaving that sod at the alter - like Veronica, I would have loved to see his pompous face when that happened.
I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Hugs from France,
Alexis xxx
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
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Poor Gwendolyn. Just when she finds someone to tell her story, she ups and bloody disappears! Joking apart, you crafted this chapter beautifully. The images you created left this reader in no doubt Gwen did the right thing, leaving that sod at the alter - like Veronica, I would have loved to see his pompous face when that happened.
I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Hugs from France,
Alexis xxx
Comment Written 06-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
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Bless your lovely heart, Alexis! Thank you for the lovely 6 stars! I love it that you still enjoy this story! Big hugs, my dear friend. :) Sandra xxx