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Comment from closetpoetjester
I have no idea of your thought process when you write but I love how your writing often comes full circle and somehow ends up back where it starts but with a new slant.
Always so elusive, my friend.
Your temple of worship shadow dances in deliberate sin and shall find itself intertwined in weightless tandem wherever trust is completely free
Oooh how was that? And ALL out of your words haha
I DO enjoy your poetry Michael. You are VERY unique.
Nice title.
Boy what I wouldn't give for a loyal tongue haha
No gold but surrrre wish I had some sixual treatment for this purrrfect piece of poetry but I peaked too early this week. I was done by Monday evening! LOL
Sassafrass xx
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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2017
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I have no idea of your thought process when you write but I love how your writing often comes full circle and somehow ends up back where it starts but with a new slant.
Always so elusive, my friend.
Your temple of worship shadow dances in deliberate sin and shall find itself intertwined in weightless tandem wherever trust is completely free
Oooh how was that? And ALL out of your words haha
I DO enjoy your poetry Michael. You are VERY unique.
Nice title.
Boy what I wouldn't give for a loyal tongue haha
No gold but surrrre wish I had some sixual treatment for this purrrfect piece of poetry but I peaked too early this week. I was done by Monday evening! LOL
Sassafrass xx
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Comment Written 27-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2017
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ah my thought process is under Sennett investigation and a big secret Sass.....but just this once I'll share a lil' magic.
first and ah formost I take my shoes and socks off, whatever the time of day and wherever the muse commands. then I muse up my hair and let out ah well the call of the wild is the best only way I know to describe it. my neighbors call it harassment and the police. then I pour a 16 oz glass of fluoridated water and down it straight up...after I pick myself up off the floor...I spin in what can only be described as awesome in circles until I disappear into the poetic realm where I'm rarely found. now you lnow...no copyian you hear...finger point. always Michael
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LOL Well after all that I think I just might read the poem and shut up
haha
Hey, everyone's thought process is different. But I knew your poetry called for something a bit spesh
Sassyfrassy
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