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Act of Endurance

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Dawn of Chaos

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Comment from chcbeck
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A well written poem which invites the reader to look at their own inner journey. It made me feel sad to. I think it was the strong opening to the poem. Great work a pleasure to read and thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
    Glad to hear my writes are slowly coming forth out of pits. Thanking you for your generous rate and comforting comments.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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There are times in life when we struggle and loneliness is a tough battle and I wish you well, you have poured words from your heart here and I especially liked the penultimate stanza referred to the toad and the ants, great, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
    Your response is most delighting to give encouragement. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed thoughts.