Dueces And One-Eyed Jacks
The best is all we can do -freestyle19 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We are given life and sometimes it does not work out as planned, but there is always another day, but don't leave it too late to turn things around as life is short! Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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We are given life and sometimes it does not work out as planned, but there is always another day, but don't leave it too late to turn things around as life is short! Love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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And getting shorter all the time. Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. I appreciate the feedback.
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, I really like this poem - a potentially amazing write, with just a bit more attention to the uneven spots, easily corrected by reading aloud several times and deleting, adding or changing a couple of words...
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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In my opinion, I really like this poem - a potentially amazing write, with just a bit more attention to the uneven spots, easily corrected by reading aloud several times and deleting, adding or changing a couple of words...
Comment Written 02-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your feedback and your suggestions.
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You are very welcome indeed...
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there;
Sometimes it takes extra play to live with the cards you're dealt in life. The game is never easy, but when someone deals from the bottom of the deck, you're doomed as soon as it starts.
Thank you for sharing,
~patty~
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Hi there;
Sometimes it takes extra play to live with the cards you're dealt in life. The game is never easy, but when someone deals from the bottom of the deck, you're doomed as soon as it starts.
Thank you for sharing,
~patty~
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Yeah, need to watch out for those dealing from the bottom. Thank you for the feedback.
Comment from jenintorre
A good poem but I hope you don't mind me pointing out a couple of things.
You've put "I need different hand" leaving out the "a" and may I suggest you replace the word "everything" with all to make it scan better. Best wishes.
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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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A good poem but I hope you don't mind me pointing out a couple of things.
You've put "I need different hand" leaving out the "a" and may I suggest you replace the word "everything" with all to make it scan better. Best wishes.
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Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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Thank you for reading and for your review. Thank you for pointing out my missing 'a'. I appreciate the feedback.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the dilemma in playing cards, feeling of losing the game, chances of losing the spirit of playing cards, good playing cards yet to learn, it looks sometime not interesting; I liked.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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This speaks the dilemma in playing cards, feeling of losing the game, chances of losing the spirit of playing cards, good playing cards yet to learn, it looks sometime not interesting; I liked.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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Thank you for reading and for your feedback.
Comment from Dean Kuch
I believe there are times when we're not meant to understand, Delahay. We simply have to take the hand we're dealt, look at things at face value, assess our current situation, then move on down the road.
Sh!t happens and life goes on.
So should we.
~Dean
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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I believe there are times when we're not meant to understand, Delahay. We simply have to take the hand we're dealt, look at things at face value, assess our current situation, then move on down the road.
Sh!t happens and life goes on.
So should we.
~Dean
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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That's really all we can do. Take the hand we're dealt and make the most of it. Thank you for your feedback.
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My pleasure. :)
Comment from MelB
This is a well written poem. We can only deal with the cards we are dealt and do the very best we can. A nice title and artwork to go along with the poem.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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This is a well written poem. We can only deal with the cards we are dealt and do the very best we can. A nice title and artwork to go along with the poem.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Thank you for reading. I appreciate the feedback.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Folks.
Beautifully written. It is the way it is, I'm afraid lol. I look back now and it takes me all day to do what I used to do all day. Some people just have to question everything we do, as you say. I say... bugger 'em! lol.
Great job and great to see a post from you.
Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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G'day Folks.
Beautifully written. It is the way it is, I'm afraid lol. I look back now and it takes me all day to do what I used to do all day. Some people just have to question everything we do, as you say. I say... bugger 'em! lol.
Great job and great to see a post from you.
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 02-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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Thanks for reading and reviewing my poem. I know you've been busy and it's good to hear from you. Take care.
Comment from pbomar1115
This is true; however, the game continues until someone cuts out the light. It is sad when life is compared to a deck of cards--for the newbie to independence.
Phillip
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2017
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This is true; however, the game continues until someone cuts out the light. It is sad when life is compared to a deck of cards--for the newbie to independence.
Phillip
Comment Written 28-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2017
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I think it was more compared to a game of cards. And about how one deals, and what one does, with what they're given in life. Thank you for reading and for your feedback.
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You're welcome.
Phillip
Comment from Irish Rain
'Freestyle' is a very good description of the way most of us live. Because sometimes life just seems so confusing, we have to 'wing' it. Loved this, blessings...
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
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'Freestyle' is a very good description of the way most of us live. Because sometimes life just seems so confusing, we have to 'wing' it. Loved this, blessings...
Comment Written 27-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
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Thank you, Irish, for your kind remarks. I appreciate the feedback. It seems in life we have to take the cards we're dealt and make the most we can from what we have. Have lemons, make lemonade.
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I LOVE lemonade!!!
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As long as it's not too tart. :)
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Yes...I add a little cherry juice....makes it a lovely pink, and sweetens it!!
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I don't think I've had it with cherry juice. Sounds interesting.
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I buy the jar of cherries...it's especially sweet.