Comment from rama devi

Excellent

Yuck indeed. Those dead bugs are onerous odorous pesky pests. This is a true-to-form haiku. Great job on the single-word satori line and word economy in general. Fine presentation. outstanding consonance + alliteration of P plus S sounds. Bravo.

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017

Thanks, rd. glad you liked it.

reply by rama devi on 04-Sep-2017

:-))

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written haiku on the stink bugs. We also have a lot of them over here. If we step on them by accident the stench is bad until you washed your shoes.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017

Thanks for reviewing. They haven't made it in the house yet. Someone told me if they did to suck them up with the sweeper.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I did not know the scientific name of this bug. Thanks for sharing your vivid and clever 5-7-5, plus picture of a bug most of us know as just "stink bug". Cheers and happy weekend when it arrives- Joan

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017

I didn't know either until I looked it up this morning.

reply by Joan E. on 02-Sep-2017

I appreciate your sharing your research as well. Hugs and happy Saturday- Joan, from the Oregon Shakespeare Festival