Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Teresa. This is a well written haiku, I think. In a few words you've managed to convey the danger of getting too close. The danger of getting to close is good to remember. The warning can apply to anything. Marilyn

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017

Thanks Marilyn:)

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

Imagery strong here, even without an image. The scene figures gently in the mind without aid. Few words but well projected.
My best wishes.
Have a great day.
RGstar

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017

Thank you RG:)

Comment from honeytree

Excellent

So much has been
said in a few words written here
the insects should be very careful though.
I guess their won't be many insects around.


Honey tree

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017

Thank you Annie:)

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Teresa, I enjoyed this haiku about insects. You have painted a vivid picture of a spider web and what is going on. What you say is exactly what insects do. I loved it. A great addition to the book. All the best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017

Thanks Ulla:)

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

Many bugs find themselves caught up in catching insects that they forget themselves and become intertwined in a spiders web,just waiting for intruders to arrive.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017

Thank you so much:)

reply by country ranch writer on 31-Aug-2017

Smiles

Comment from Lulube

Excellent

Great imagery, you can envision these bees, joyfully, (or are they?) buzzing around, not paying attention to their surroundings, until too late. They are captured, not much fun any more. Good little story.

lulube

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017

Thank you lulube:)

reply by Lulube on 31-Aug-2017

welcome

lulube

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Exceptional

Oh yes my friend I liked this a very good fun haiku with a splendid satori line this haiku made me smile well created and original regards Jill

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017

Thanks for the awesome six stars!!

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

Hahahaha! G'day Teresa.

I love it, mate and wish I had a six left to give you, but I'm sorry I don't.

Every night here, about 6 PM we get these flippin' giant biting flying ants come around whatever light is on. They seem to love me more than others lol. Delia says it's because I've got "sweet white meat for them to chew on" lol.

Great job.

Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017

Mosquitos love me. Always biting me even when no one else notices them around. Thanks for the great review:)

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

I've been off site a few days giving my eyes a rest. I enjoyed this haiku very much. As with a true haiku, no picture is needed. You painted a perfect picture with your well chosen words. Very nice work with this one.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017

Thank you Sasha:)

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

hehe this haiku is a fun one as I have seen this happen many times with insects It sort of reminds me of the spider scene in Lord of the rings.
I am not a big fan of Haiku but I like this one. thanks for sharing

dip

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017

Thank you dip:)