Haiku Club Challenges, Book II
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "haiku (rolling green hills)"an anthology of haiku written by fanstory poets
25 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a very nicely written poem that I enjoyed reading. So true. There are ups and downs everywhere. The play on words of rolling hills and ups and downs works well here. Marilyn
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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This is a very nicely written poem that I enjoyed reading. So true. There are ups and downs everywhere. The play on words of rolling hills and ups and downs works well here. Marilyn
Comment Written 24-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words my friend.
Gypsy
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You're welcome.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi Gypsy;
a lovely presentation of the words on a vibrant green background. It enhances the rolling hills to a lushness, and the ups and downs flow with a pleasant image. Thank you so much for sharing this lovely haiku,
~patty~
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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Hi Gypsy;
a lovely presentation of the words on a vibrant green background. It enhances the rolling hills to a lushness, and the ups and downs flow with a pleasant image. Thank you so much for sharing this lovely haiku,
~patty~
Comment Written 23-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Great analogy in comparing the ups and downs of life to rolling green, verdant hills, MariVal.
Good use of brevity in 4/7/4 syllabic count.
Yet another excellent challenge issued and a fantastic edition to the book.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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Great analogy in comparing the ups and downs of life to rolling green, verdant hills, MariVal.
Good use of brevity in 4/7/4 syllabic count.
Yet another excellent challenge issued and a fantastic edition to the book.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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Thank you, Dean, you are very kind.
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And YOU are a very good haikuist.
You're more than welcome, babe.
~Dean ;)
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I like your signature :) Thank you
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You're welcome, darlin'.
Now I shall do my happy dance...
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Hahaha....that's weird
Comment from Ricky1024
This is part of "The Haiku Challenge."
{All can Participate}
"The Rolling Hills...
"Sacramento...
"The Ups and Downs...
"All worked together to make this a fine Piece."
"Thanks Gypsy Rose and...
"Cher Knows and wrote and sang a 60's song based on that Subject...
"I like the 60's Movie based on the "Gypsy's."
Called....
"The Wolf Man!"
"With Lon Chaney JR."
DR. Ricky 1024.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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This is part of "The Haiku Challenge."
{All can Participate}
"The Rolling Hills...
"Sacramento...
"The Ups and Downs...
"All worked together to make this a fine Piece."
"Thanks Gypsy Rose and...
"Cher Knows and wrote and sang a 60's song based on that Subject...
"I like the 60's Movie based on the "Gypsy's."
Called....
"The Wolf Man!"
"With Lon Chaney JR."
DR. Ricky 1024.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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Thank you
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written haiku. The green grass seems to roll over the hills in the park. Representing lfes ups and downs a smooth ride or we can make it bumpy.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2017
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A very well-written haiku. The green grass seems to roll over the hills in the park. Representing lfes ups and downs a smooth ride or we can make it bumpy.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
This was beautifully stitched together, marrying the wonderful scenery of the rolling hills with the everyday lives of the people around having their ups and downs.
Fantastic Gypsy.
Mitchell
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2017
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This was beautifully stitched together, marrying the wonderful scenery of the rolling hills with the everyday lives of the people around having their ups and downs.
Fantastic Gypsy.
Mitchell
Comment Written 21-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words my friend
Comment from Ulla
Hola Guapa. Oh I liked this haiku very, very much. There's so much meaning to the well chosen words. It's a great satori line. Espero que todo es bien contigo. Un abrazo. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
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Hola Guapa. Oh I liked this haiku very, very much. There's so much meaning to the well chosen words. It's a great satori line. Espero que todo es bien contigo. Un abrazo. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 21-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Gyspy, now that I have exchanged the desert of Las Vegas for my home in Ohio, I see these rolling hills of green everywhere I go.
I have been to the Old Sacramento Park years ago. Such a wonderful and beautiful place.
Even being around this landscape, I find myself living with the ups and downs in my life. I find myself relating to the words of this most excellent haiku. Well written my friend,,,,,,,,Jim
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
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Gyspy, now that I have exchanged the desert of Las Vegas for my home in Ohio, I see these rolling hills of green everywhere I go.
I have been to the Old Sacramento Park years ago. Such a wonderful and beautiful place.
Even being around this landscape, I find myself living with the ups and downs in my life. I find myself relating to the words of this most excellent haiku. Well written my friend,,,,,,,,Jim
Comment Written 21-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from apky
Lovely poem and the green of the background was soothing to me.
I could imagine playing football, or badminton or frisbees with my kids in the back on a sunny day.
Hugs,
Aki xx
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
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Lovely poem and the green of the background was soothing to me.
I could imagine playing football, or badminton or frisbees with my kids in the back on a sunny day.
Hugs,
Aki xx
Comment Written 21-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from kiwigirl2821
I liked this one Sister. It has a beautiful finish to it. Life's ups and downs are had by everyone aren't they. I even like that you kept the presentation simple and direct. Great write for me. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
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I liked this one Sister. It has a beautiful finish to it. Life's ups and downs are had by everyone aren't they. I even like that you kept the presentation simple and direct. Great write for me. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 21-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
