Haiku Club Challenges, Book II
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Haiku( leafless winter trees)"an anthology of haiku written by fanstory poets
2 total reviews
Comment from beizanten
The picture really fit the poetry. Simple, short yet good poetry. Keep up the very good work. What does flair mean. The lighthearted mood flow quite well throughout the poetry
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2017
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The picture really fit the poetry. Simple, short yet good poetry. Keep up the very good work. What does flair mean. The lighthearted mood flow quite well throughout the poetry
Comment Written 15-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2017
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi Zanya;
such a lovely haiku about trees and the many colors we see, if we only take the time to look!
Your presentation works well and the meaning of your words shine through. I was immediately able to pick up on the 'kigo,' WINTER, and the 'satori' was loud and clear in the last line.
Well done,
~patty~
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2017
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Hi Zanya;
such a lovely haiku about trees and the many colors we see, if we only take the time to look!
Your presentation works well and the meaning of your words shine through. I was immediately able to pick up on the 'kigo,' WINTER, and the 'satori' was loud and clear in the last line.
Well done,
~patty~
Comment Written 15-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2017
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
