Comment from closetpoetjester

Excellent

Wow what a lovely sentiment here. I think if the one you grow old with can feel forever young because of you then that is a wonderful compliment and feeling.
Beautifully done Curt.
P

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017

Thank you my friend,
We will see what happens, keep your fingers crossed!
Curt

Comment from rose42benn

Excellent

Nice. Old hearts bear the weight of the journey, so to feel young yet with your life's partner is a gift. I think not using any punctuation actually allows the words to seem light and captures the speakers feeling of youth.
rose

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2017

Thank you.

Comment from EverInParadise

Excellent

Well done. Simply put with a promise held in the words. You held to the 575 without syllables. That quite an achievement.

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017

Thank you !

Comment from Analie Shepherd

Excellent

Well ... I love this! You have said something very important in such a few words. Often these short poems try to say too much and are just confusing. Yours is straight forward and clear. Lovely!

Blessings, Analie

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017

Thank you!!!