Comment from Asem.inspirations

Excellent

Good morning, Trisha:

So sorry for his loss and your loss. It is so necessary to write about it because writing does have it's healing effects. You get to say what you could not say or did not get a chance to say. Your poem express it all well. My heart is with you and I hope that your son's heart is healing. I know it's hard. You know that I know. Much love...

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017

Thanks for your compassionate review ..I don?t think he?ll ever get married . I know that you have a worse scenarioI really appreciate the strange bond you and I share .as friends. Thanks again Tier. Love and hugs,Trisha

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I thought this was a powerful poem. You can feel the emotions and even sadness in the poem. The word choices are excellent. I love how a mother thanks a daughter in law for what she has done for her son. But sad as well for obvious reasons. Great job.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017

Hi Michael, yes it is sad. He was devastated . Thank you so much for reading my poem, and reviewing so compassionately

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written but very sad poem about the loss of a daughter in law. You used very good wording and great imagery. I am so sorry for your loss! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017

Thanks Teri. for you compassionate review
HugsTrisha