Haiku Club Challenges, Book II
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Haiku(flowers fill the air)"an anthology of haiku written by fanstory poets
2 total reviews
Comment from beizanten
A short, simple yet quite beautifully written poem about flowers. Keep up the good work. Beautiful picture, it fit the poem. It must be hard to write Haiku since it is very short
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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A short, simple yet quite beautifully written poem about flowers. Keep up the good work. Beautiful picture, it fit the poem. It must be hard to write Haiku since it is very short
Comment Written 30-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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YES thanks for reading and critique - zanya
Comment from rama devi
I love the spring-energy here and the fantastic, fun alliteration of F, especially in the two-word satori line. Fine consonance of L and T as well. Just one nit--I think you meant diverse, not divers, yes?
Fine presentation.
Fine work.
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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I love the spring-energy here and the fantastic, fun alliteration of F, especially in the two-word satori line. Fine consonance of L and T as well. Just one nit--I think you meant diverse, not divers, yes?
Fine presentation.
Fine work.
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 30-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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Thanks for an encouraging review zanya
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