Haiku Club Challenges, Book II
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "golden orb of light"an anthology of haiku written by fanstory poets
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks today's viewpoint about the sun or the golden orb of light that once in the ancient time our forefathers' god of sun is in exaltation; I liked.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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This speaks today's viewpoint about the sun or the golden orb of light that once in the ancient time our forefathers' god of sun is in exaltation; I liked.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Thanks for reading and critique zanya
Comment from dragonpoet
A mystical view of the beautiful sunset on the rocky coast of the artwork.
What is the n' supposed to mean. The line could be 'star of our solar system'. Then star could be the actual definition of the sun and a metaphor for the sun being most important giver of life.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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A mystical view of the beautiful sunset on the rocky coast of the artwork.
What is the n' supposed to mean. The line could be 'star of our solar system'. Then star could be the actual definition of the sun and a metaphor for the sun being most important giver of life.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 23-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Thanks for reading and critique zanya
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My pleasure.
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Comment from apky
I might be wrong here,
but I seem to think I already
reviewed this beautiful poem.
Perhaps it's just that I
reviewed one
with similar words
and the same breathtaking
artwork.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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I might be wrong here,
but I seem to think I already
reviewed this beautiful poem.
Perhaps it's just that I
reviewed one
with similar words
and the same breathtaking
artwork.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Thanks for reading zanya
