Comment from Nikki-Nicole

Excellent

You've written a good poem.
It consists of three lines with a syllable count of 6-7-5
The image shown supports the writing. The background goes well with the art and color of font selected.
Thanks for sharing your Haiku.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017

Thanks for reading zanya

Comment from Danielle G

Excellent

This is a very interesting concept. The haiku pushes you to acknowledge that within yourself you may contain different entities or aspects of yourself. The only suggestion I would offer is to make the first line "hybrid sounds of prayer" because I think it sounds better than "hybrid prayerful sounds."

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017

Thanks for reading and comments zanya

Comment from moongirlwriter

Excellent

Haiku poems take the world of words and reduce them to as few as necessary to convey a thought or feeling. I think you have done this beautifully. Prayer is different for each of us but it always starts deep within the soul. . . . at least for me it does. Thank you for sharing your poem.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017

And thanks for reading zanya