Haiku Club Challenges, Book II
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "haiku (on my knees I pray)"an anthology of haiku written by fanstory poets
24 total reviews
Comment from honeytree
I really loved the art work
for these words written
To pray in a quiet room
can be very special in every way.
Honeytree
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2017
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I really loved the art work
for these words written
To pray in a quiet room
can be very special in every way.
Honeytree
Comment Written 14-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words.
Comment from Mark Schardine
The harvest moon means a lot of work, but also reaping the rewards of year's work. Prayer can express gratitude before the benefits are realized.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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The harvest moon means a lot of work, but also reaping the rewards of year's work. Prayer can express gratitude before the benefits are realized.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the review and for reading all my haiku.
Comment from Boogienights
I have never been much into Haiku, although I'm started to try my hand at it. I liked yours because, like all great poetry, it painted a picture in my mind. Thank you for sharing this.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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I have never been much into Haiku, although I'm started to try my hand at it. I liked yours because, like all great poetry, it painted a picture in my mind. Thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Ulla
Hola Gitana, como estas? Aqui hace tanto calor que no puedo hacer ni uno u otro. This is a wonderful haiku about prayer. I loved it. Very expressive.
By the way, do you know, how Douglas Paul is doing? He hasn't been on the site for quite a while.
I'm about to post my own haiku for this week. Un abrazo de tu amiga Ulla :)xx
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Hola Gitana, como estas? Aqui hace tanto calor que no puedo hacer ni uno u otro. This is a wonderful haiku about prayer. I loved it. Very expressive.
By the way, do you know, how Douglas Paul is doing? He hasn't been on the site for quite a while.
I'm about to post my own haiku for this week. Un abrazo de tu amiga Ulla :)xx
Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Hola guapa
Douglas is fine he just doesn't have the time to do fanstory. I chat with him at the haiku club every day.
Gracias bonita
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Oh. I'm glad he is fine. Thanks for letting me know.:)))
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hello little sister,
"on my knees I pray" - this portrays a soul of purpose and dedication to me.
"enveloped in amber light --" - amber resonates truth and innocence, the light of God hugs your truth.
"harvest moon" - this feels like a time of plenty and generosity. The harvest moon is one of the largest moons of the seasons. It's beauty fills the sky and in your poem, it fills the heart with true understanding.
Loved it MariVal. xoxo deborah
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Hello little sister,
"on my knees I pray" - this portrays a soul of purpose and dedication to me.
"enveloped in amber light --" - amber resonates truth and innocence, the light of God hugs your truth.
"harvest moon" - this feels like a time of plenty and generosity. The harvest moon is one of the largest moons of the seasons. It's beauty fills the sky and in your poem, it fills the heart with true understanding.
Loved it MariVal. xoxo deborah
Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Thank you, Deborah, I appreciate your review and kind words, sweetie pie.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day mate.
You are the queen/princess of these little poems. This is another beautifully presented piece.
There are lots of those little "Ã??Ã?" site glitches on the member names and in your notes.
Great job once again.
Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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G'day mate.
You are the queen/princess of these little poems. This is another beautifully presented piece.
There are lots of those little "Ã??Ã?" site glitches on the member names and in your notes.
Great job once again.
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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I can't get rid of the site glitches, I tried. :(
Thank you for the review and kind words, mate.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from MizKat
Hi Gypsy Blue Rose,
You are always wonderful at writing poetry. I always look forward to reading
them as I know I will like them. As long as you keep writing poems I'll always
be happy to read them.
Kat
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Hi Gypsy Blue Rose,
You are always wonderful at writing poetry. I always look forward to reading
them as I know I will like them. As long as you keep writing poems I'll always
be happy to read them.
Kat
Comment Written 12-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Thank you
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You're welcome. I'll be posting a poem.
Kat
Comment from krys123
Cheers, Gypsy;
-Wow! Romantically artistic in a composite of beautiful artistry in relationship to a very demonstratively descriptive and definitively expressive imagery presented by your haiku. And I'm gratefully sorry I have no more six-star ratings in my coffer or outside give you one.
-Great to grammatically connected lines that are full of imagery.
-A great satori and kigo combined to present an aha moment and spontaneous creativity that supports the conceptual theme of your haiku.
-Thanks for sharing and take care and have a good one.
Alex
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017
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Cheers, Gypsy;
-Wow! Romantically artistic in a composite of beautiful artistry in relationship to a very demonstratively descriptive and definitively expressive imagery presented by your haiku. And I'm gratefully sorry I have no more six-star ratings in my coffer or outside give you one.
-Great to grammatically connected lines that are full of imagery.
-A great satori and kigo combined to present an aha moment and spontaneous creativity that supports the conceptual theme of your haiku.
-Thanks for sharing and take care and have a good one.
Alex
Comment Written 12-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017
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Thank you, my friend, I appreciate your review. Congratulations on your winnings :) you are on a roll.
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Thank you very much for the congratulations, Jesse, and take care and have a good one. You are very welcome.
Alex
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I'm not Jesse.... It's gypsy :)
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes my friend this is well written and has a lovely feel to the piece the closing line works very well the picture chosen adds the finishing touches well done again regards Jill
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017
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Yes my friend this is well written and has a lovely feel to the piece the closing line works very well the picture chosen adds the finishing touches well done again regards Jill
Comment Written 12-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017
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Thank you, my friend, I appreciate your review.
Comment from Rasmine
Hello, Gypsy, :)
Sounds witchy! :P
My favorite season is fall, so I love your haiku. Is the kigo the satori? Okay, I looked it up, confusing. Kigo has to do with weather, satori is the awakening part.
Let me get to the forum, to check it out.
Have a good day. :)
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017
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Hello, Gypsy, :)
Sounds witchy! :P
My favorite season is fall, so I love your haiku. Is the kigo the satori? Okay, I looked it up, confusing. Kigo has to do with weather, satori is the awakening part.
Let me get to the forum, to check it out.
Have a good day. :)
Comment Written 12-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017
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Hello, Rasmine, the kigo is harvest moon for autumn. Thank you very much for the exceptional review and six stars, my friend.
gypsy hugs
