Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Dare I admit I'm not really a fan of Shakespeare but I love what you did with this romance haiku combining two of his tales in one short scream. Made me smile
cheers
valda

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017

Thanks, Valda.
I'm glad ya liked it. :)

Comment from Just2Write

Excellent

Oh my, I'd say they were in the sepelcur a tad too long. JULIET didn't want to hang around in there playing with the bones of her slain cousin - who if I remember rightly, Romeo sent there.
I really liked your play on screams vs. Dreams. Well done.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017

Comment from lalajovanoski

Excellent

Hello my dear friend, I very much enjoyed reading this nicely written 5-7-5 Haiku. I think of the content is good and strong and I like the structure it is very soft and smooth. Thank you very much for sharing this. God bless you my friend. With love, Lala

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017

Thanks, lalajovanoski.
Have a wonderful weekend
~Dean

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Oh hell Dean I only get to give you two cents worth of attitude on this one lmao! Ok she's a screamer alright a real down in the dust bowl joy. Actually loved it. They make a striking couple! xoxo d

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017

They kinda do, don't they, Deborah?
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
~Dean

Comment from Sis Cat

Excellent

This summer romance haiku made me smile because of its play on words:

Midsummer Night's scream

It is clever and entertaining.

Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017

Thanks for your R & R, Andre.
Much obliged,
~Dean :)

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

Very nice work with this one. I love the, Midsummer Night's scream... definitely only you would come up with that. Excellent artistic presentation too. I got a real kick out of this one.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2017

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-A very romantic graphic and good presentation.
-Syllable count is good.
-I am sure Shakespeare would like this, Dean!
-Romeo and Juliet was definitely romance and tragedy.
-Clever play on the title in the satori.
-Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2017

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

loved your play on words Dean and the 'spring to summer' romance as purely nonsense. I learn so much on this site.
Excellent haiku with a perfect satori line.
well done.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2017

Thanks so much for reading, Janet. I'm very happy to know you enjoyed it.
~Dean :)

Comment from write hand blue

Excellent

I like the play of words 'A Midsummer Night's Scream'. This changes the title to match the picture, with the purple script well chosen and matching the mood perfectly. Great poem, inventive and thought provoking. Nice one Dean...

~Mel~

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2017

Thanks for reading, Mel.
Much obliged...

Comment from Aussie

Exceptional

Short British bother. Must have taken a very long time to get married (skeletons) or was this after they kicked the bucket? Shakespeare would turn in his grave on reading your offering. I have visited his house in England, too small to swing a mouse! Well done my friend.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2017