Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This may be true. It is said that cities can be lonely places. That's not been my experience and I hope it isn't that way for most residents. The city offers so much, although I like to visit and then come home to the country. I think your 5-7-5 touches upon a sad, but true, aspect of city life. Marilyn

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017

Thanks for reading zanya

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello my friend,

Good job following the contest rules. You wrote a 5-7-5 poem on the topic of city.
-no author's notes
-no special effects whatsoever
-use fanstory's basic or advanced editor
-two color presentation.... etc....

Your topic is profound and well written. You have my vote so far.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017

Great -thanks for the accolade zanya

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017

Thanks for reading zanya

Comment from Melissa Anderson

Excellent

Despite the pulse of the city, it can certainly be a very lonely place. This poem says a lot in so few words, and your picture is very appropriate too.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017

Thanks for reading and critique zanya