Haiku Club Challenges, Book II
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Haiku (putrid healthcare bill)"an anthology of haiku written by fanstory poets
22 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing your political satire. Your cartoon selection is a hoot--too bad it's so true. I admired your play on Robin Hood and use of alliteration. Sighs- Joan
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017
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Thank you for sharing your political satire. Your cartoon selection is a hoot--too bad it's so true. I admired your play on Robin Hood and use of alliteration. Sighs- Joan
Comment Written 26-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
Gypsy
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Wow yes a true haiku that everyone can relate to. The imagery is true and the last line sums it all up of taking from the poor to give to the rich.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017
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Wow yes a true haiku that everyone can relate to. The imagery is true and the last line sums it all up of taking from the poor to give to the rich.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from krys123
Gypsy;
-you captured the essence of what plaguing our country today and you done it by writing a haiku that is so explanatory on the subject of healthcare that it is, from the standpoint of most people, a ridiculous healthcare bill.
-The first 2 lines are not only grammatically connected but also serve as a diving board for your satori and launches it with great appeal. The first 2 lines also's as I said, set up the reader for our and exceptional explanatory undesirable attitude towards this Republican health care bill.
-This is an excellent political haiku I found the most appealing.
-Take care and have a good one.
Alex
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Gypsy;
-you captured the essence of what plaguing our country today and you done it by writing a haiku that is so explanatory on the subject of healthcare that it is, from the standpoint of most people, a ridiculous healthcare bill.
-The first 2 lines are not only grammatically connected but also serve as a diving board for your satori and launches it with great appeal. The first 2 lines also's as I said, set up the reader for our and exceptional explanatory undesirable attitude towards this Republican health care bill.
-This is an excellent political haiku I found the most appealing.
-Take care and have a good one.
Alex
Comment Written 25-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Thank you, Alex
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes my friend I know that the health care system is failing in your country and needs sorting it doesn't seem to be helping those who have a low income as you say its the rich getting richer well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Yes my friend I know that the health care system is failing in your country and needs sorting it doesn't seem to be helping those who have a low income as you say its the rich getting richer well done regards Jill
Comment Written 25-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie
Gypsy
Comment from lalajovanoski
Hello my dear friend I really enjoyed reading this commentary poem I think that it is deep and possesses a strong message and it is very clear. Thank you very much for sharing this. God bless you love lolla
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Hello my dear friend I really enjoyed reading this commentary poem I think that it is deep and possesses a strong message and it is very clear. Thank you very much for sharing this. God bless you love lolla
Comment Written 25-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
Gypsy
Comment from Mark Schardine
The picture and the text follow in the best traditions of political cartoons. They work very well together to make us realize that the proposed health care bill can have lethal results.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2017
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The picture and the text follow in the best traditions of political cartoons. They work very well together to make us realize that the proposed health care bill can have lethal results.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the review.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
How very true and healthcare is already so lacking in these areas. My state is 50th in the nation in terms of mental health--quality and availability. People needing admission are often held in the ER for up to 5 days until a bed is available. Tragic~Debbie
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2017
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How very true and healthcare is already so lacking in these areas. My state is 50th in the nation in terms of mental health--quality and availability. People needing admission are often held in the ER for up to 5 days until a bed is available. Tragic~Debbie
Comment Written 24-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the review.
Comment from Rasmine
Gypsy,
I love the illustration! Where did you find it?
I am scared because I'm on Medicaid and that will be cut. I will have to fend for myself like everyone will have to do. Let's just pray the Senate vetoes all of it. Wish we lived in a real democracy.
TC
Very good poem.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2017
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Gypsy,
I love the illustration! Where did you find it?
I am scared because I'm on Medicaid and that will be cut. I will have to fend for myself like everyone will have to do. Let's just pray the Senate vetoes all of it. Wish we lived in a real democracy.
TC
Very good poem.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2017
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I use Medicare and I am not sure if I would be affected but I am scared too. I pray the Senate vetoes all of it too.
Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
Gypsy
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Gypsy, So many things can be said about this individual and not many good. I love the one where he says that he doesn't want "poor" people running any of his departments. OMG! You do these so well. Good luck. xoxo d
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2017
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Hi Gypsy, So many things can be said about this individual and not many good. I love the one where he says that he doesn't want "poor" people running any of his departments. OMG! You do these so well. Good luck. xoxo d
Comment Written 24-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie. I hate Donald trump. I hope he gets impeached soon. The man has no morals. All he cares about is money and himself.
Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
Comment from Heather Knight
This is so very sad! It's always the poor who suffer. I totally agree with your poem and your author notes.
Very good illustration too.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2017
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This is so very sad! It's always the poor who suffer. I totally agree with your poem and your author notes.
Very good illustration too.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
Gypsy
