Haiku Club Challenges, Book II
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "senryu (lost her curly hair)"an anthology of haiku written by fanstory poets
23 total reviews
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Gypsy. Oh My! I'm not sure I can write haiku however, I may give it a go. Thing is that middle line to lead to a resolve seems so deep in many. I'm not sure I'm that deep, but you, girl yours are amazing. I just bought your book that Dean contributed to ...surreal! Good luck xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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Hi Gypsy. Oh My! I'm not sure I can write haiku however, I may give it a go. Thing is that middle line to lead to a resolve seems so deep in many. I'm not sure I'm that deep, but you, girl yours are amazing. I just bought your book that Dean contributed to ...surreal! Good luck xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 23-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the review and for buying our book, Kiwi :) you are very kind.
Gypsy
Comment from Mark Schardine
I remember the loss of hair and the fatigue of chemotherapy. It makes for a very debilitating experience, one that leaves many memories, memories also of recovery.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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I remember the loss of hair and the fatigue of chemotherapy. It makes for a very debilitating experience, one that leaves many memories, memories also of recovery.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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thank you very much for the double review
gypsy
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Gypsy,
I hope this child returns her spurt when her curly hair returns and also her smile returns
It seems sad but, their is always a happy day coming.
I have been there and I know
Gert
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Hello Gypsy,
I hope this child returns her spurt when her curly hair returns and also her smile returns
It seems sad but, their is always a happy day coming.
I have been there and I know
Gert
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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thank you very much, Gert,
gypsy
Comment from Grasshopper2
Gypsy Blue Rose,
Poignant with a proper use of the phrase "spirit away." The picture is perfect with your message. Well done.
Michael
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Gypsy Blue Rose,
Poignant with a proper use of the phrase "spirit away." The picture is perfect with your message. Well done.
Michael
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the review, my friend. I am glad you like it.
Gypsy
Comment from l.raven
HI Gypsy, this is so sad my sweet friend...I know kids who have lost their hair to cancer....very well written you....
and the picture is heartbreaking...they are starting to get closer the healing of cancer...God Bless...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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HI Gypsy, this is so sad my sweet friend...I know kids who have lost their hair to cancer....very well written you....
and the picture is heartbreaking...they are starting to get closer the healing of cancer...God Bless...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 21-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie. Luv ya
Gypsy
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your always sooo welcome you...love ya xxoo
Comment from Curly Girly
To me, this verse could be about a child that is undergoing cancer treatment:
lost her curly hair
and sparkle in her eyes--
spirit away
Let's just hope that the last line does not materialise until she is old.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017
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To me, this verse could be about a child that is undergoing cancer treatment:
lost her curly hair
and sparkle in her eyes--
spirit away
Let's just hope that the last line does not materialise until she is old.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Oh yes my friend this is a really sad haiku so much feeling enclosed in this piece but the photograph shows how the girl truly feels well done again my friend regards Jill
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017
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Oh yes my friend this is a really sad haiku so much feeling enclosed in this piece but the photograph shows how the girl truly feels well done again my friend regards Jill
Comment Written 20-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017
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Hello, Jill, thank you very much for the review and kindness.
Gypsy
Comment from Ulla
Hola, Marival. This is so sad. But a horrible fact to so many. But when it hits an innocent child it makes it almost unbearable. A very well written contribution to the book. Es tan triste pero me ha gustado mucho. Un besito. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017
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Hola, Marival. This is so sad. But a horrible fact to so many. But when it hits an innocent child it makes it almost unbearable. A very well written contribution to the book. Es tan triste pero me ha gustado mucho. Un besito. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 20-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017
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Hola, guapa,
Thank you for the review and the kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from MizKat
Hi Gypsy,
Again you have written a very nice poem. I wish that I could write poems like you do. It takes me a long time to write them.
Kat
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017
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Hi Gypsy,
Again you have written a very nice poem. I wish that I could write poems like you do. It takes me a long time to write them.
Kat
Comment Written 20-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the review and the kind words.
Gypsy
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Gypsy,
You are very welcome my friend.
Kat
Comment from Dean Kuch
Cancer is so cruel. It has taken many members of my own family far before their time.
However, it seems all the more cruel when it affects an innocent child.
This is an excellent senryu, MariVal.
Sad, but so is life much of the time.
~Dean
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017
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Cancer is so cruel. It has taken many members of my own family far before their time.
However, it seems all the more cruel when it affects an innocent child.
This is an excellent senryu, MariVal.
Sad, but so is life much of the time.
~Dean
Comment Written 20-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the review and the kind words. Thank you for the six stars.... that is very generous of you.
Gypsy
