Comment from 914

Excellent

I just randomly scrolled down and stopped at your name
, and wow what a surprise.
Thank you for allowing me inside your world of poetry
enjoyed it very much. 914

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2017

Comment from dragonpoet

Exceptional

I think we all feel this way sometimes. This is a very imaginative way full of strong imagery about leaving reality for fantasy land. Sometimes we need the kind of staycation;

I like your use of alliteration and you choice of artwork.

Keep writing

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 21-May-2017

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reply by the author on 22-May-2017

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed the imagery in this Etheree , poetic devices and artwork. Appreciate all your comments and the special rating! Cheers ... ;o) starkat

reply by dragonpoet on 22-May-2017

You're welcome. It was well worth it.

dp

Comment from IndianaIrish

Exceptional

Loved your Etheree poem, DriftingKat, and please accept my congratulations for your second place finish in the contest. Your poem is beautifully written with wonderful alliteration and enjambment. I'd love to make a trip to Shangra-La...know the way? I love the line "where dream-pillows are stuffed with starlight"!! Congrats!
Smiles,
WanderlustIndy :-)

 Comment Written 18-May-2017

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reply by the author on 19-May-2017

Thanks, WanderlustIndy! So glad you liked my Etheree , and the alliterations and enjambment. Still drifting, but getting closer to Shangri-La. I will send the dream-pillow your way ASAP so you can begin the journey. Love your comments, Congrats, and I'm thrilled with the special rating ... ;o) DriiftingKat

Comment from Kerry Foley

Excellent

This is a fantastic Etheree. I would sure like to have your dream pillow drifting on a vast ocean lol, good luck ~Kerry~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

 Comment Written 15-May-2017

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reply by the author on 15-May-2017

Thanks. Glad you liked this Etheree. I'm almost there. Will toss the dream pillow your way as soon as I arrive.
Appreciate your comments. Cheers ... ;o) Art

Comment from estory

Excellent

The alliterations create some nice patterns here, the rhythms of the meter kind of toss and turn in this poem, capturing that sense of a person tossing and turning in their dreams. the lines unfold out of a single point into a whole sky full of stars. Possibilies. estory

 Comment Written 15-May-2017

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reply by the author on 15-May-2017

Thanks, estory, for pointing out some of the poetic devices used in this Etheree. This form requires an extreme economy of words and syllables to get the imagery and metaphor across. Glad you liked the alliteration, rhymes and imagery. Do appreciate all your comments. Cheers ... ;o) starkat

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

This is absolutely great phrasing. You have a way with words. Your poem is an excellent contest entry, I'm sure it will do well. Good luck.

 Comment Written 14-May-2017

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reply by the author on 15-May-2017

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed the phrasing in this Etheree. Appreciate all your comments. Cheers ... ;o)

Comment from Oatmeal

Excellent

Starkat,

You did a wonderful job with the challenge that you chose. Well chosen words are excellent. The theme is strong. Your feelings are expressed well. Your arrangement looks very nice. The flow is smooth.

There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.

The words you chose worked well.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 14-May-2017

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reply by the author on 15-May-2017

Thanks, Oatmeal! So glad you enjoyed the word choices and imagery in this Etheree. Do appreciate all your comments.
Cheers ... ;o) starkat

Comment from XGoneX

Excellent

Hello,

So many times we want to leave reality and go back to a place and time of cherished memories.
Particularly enjoyed the seven first lines.
Exquisite lines, and great alliteration and flow of words. You also follow the contest rules.
Good luck.

 Comment Written 14-May-2017

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reply by the author on 14-May-2017

Thanks for the wonderful review. Glad you enjoyed this etheree. Appreciate all your comments. Cheers ... ;o)

Comment from Hitcher

Excellent

When you get there can you send a raven with a message and tell me all about it. Permanent happiness sounds crazy, but then one would be crazy to turn it down. Good luck !!

 Comment Written 14-May-2017

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reply by the author on 14-May-2017

Thanks! Okay ... a raven will be sent your way ... ;.>}

Comment from marybell1

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your Etheree "Just Drifting". You had all your lines and syllables correct and you chose an appropriate picture for your poem.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 14-May-2017

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reply by the author on 14-May-2017

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it. Appreciate your comments ... ;o)

reply by marybell1 on 16-May-2017

You are most welcome.
Marybell1.