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The Original Sin

Was it better in the good old days?

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Comment from Mustang Patty
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Thank you for sharing your entry for the Enjoyment of Eating contest. Yes, if Adam and Eve hadn't been kicked out of Eden, things would be much different - many of us wouldn't be here! Your humorous poem had a lot to say,
~patty~
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2017

Comment from chcbeck
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A great poem, love the concept of taking it right to the roots of garden of eden, focusing on what we could miss. Original idea. Thanks for sharing and good luck for the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2017