Comment from judester

Excellent

I love this whimsical glimpse of our beloved bees, The yellow background continues the fun. This summer at my cabin in Vermont, I am going to make a huge wildflower garden for the bees, just so I can watch them work. Cheers, judester

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017

Thank you for the read and the comments. Enjoy the summer and the bees.

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

What a wonderful children's rhyming poem for this contest!! Little honey-bees work hard, and are now in danger I hear. I love your entry, blessings...

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2017

Thank you for your read and your review.

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes this is well written and written in a way that children would understand the presentation is spot on and I enjoyed good luck regards Jill

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2017

Thank you for your read and review.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written and creatively presented children's poem to learn more about the honeybees and what their special task is and how they produce honey for us to collect.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2017

Thanks for the read and the comments.

Comment from Marvin Whitfield

Good

It's a very cute poem about a honey bee going from flower to flower collecting-
all that is needed for making our honey. A very nice flow to it!

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 Comment Written 30-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2017

Thanks for the read.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This tells how lovely it is to watch honeybees at work and how their labour brings sweetness to our loving home; I liked the restricted rhymes but enjoyed the read.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2017

Thanks for the read and the comments.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a fine entry for the contest
with some excellent rhymes in flower/power and comb/home
Very nice use of alliteration in the "f" and "d" sounds
Perfect presentation in the picture and color
most appropriate for very young children
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2017

Thank you for the read and the comments.

Comment from LoannaLois

Excellent

I love to watch bees also...as long as it is behind glass�I'm allergic to the little honies. I loved the repeating words and the illustration.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2017

Thanks you for the read and the comments.

Comment from Jake P.

Excellent

I like the choice for the poem. It provides a good lesson on the importance of what they do. 'Proboscis' seems a little above the age level. 'Drink nectar fill' is awkward. Good job with the picture.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017

Thanks for the read and the comments.

Comment from MaggieF

Excellent

The picture and background colour put me in a summer mood before I even read your poem. Good alliteration and onomatopoeia.The last line is very true where would we be without our honeybee? Maggie's

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017

Thanks for the read and the comments. Hoping for a nice spring and a fruitful summer.