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Child in the NIght

A poem for a child

4 total reviews 
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
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A beautiful soft and gentle soporific and sweet poem, perfectly paced and absolutely lovely, interesting rhyme, you can tell this comes from the heart. Well done and very kind regards Meia x

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2017

reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
    Dear Meia, Thank you for your review. Dove
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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a great contest entry. It flows nicely. I thought the contest was for a children's poem. You made it a poem about a child. Very good.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2017

reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
    Dear Thomas, Thank you for your review. Dove
Comment from Mustang Patty
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You've captured the essence of a small child wandering through a sleeping house. I could see the actions through the images you drew. I smiled at the piano keys - they are always a magnet. Thank you for sharing,
~patty~

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2017

reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
    Dear Patty,

    Thank you for your review. Dove
Comment from mmonaghan777
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Super sweet. Makes you want to whisper so they remain in their beds. Thinking of many nights when there was the awakening to be calmed and put back to bed.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2017

reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
    Dear mmonaghan777 Thank you for your review. Dove