Walk With Me.
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "Finally"From victim to survivor of abuse.
14 total reviews
Comment from MelB
This is a heartfelt and gripping piece. I'm so sorry for the abuse you endured. I've been through much of it in my lifetime too. I now work with those who have been abused. Healing that inner child is the only way to freedom.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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This is a heartfelt and gripping piece. I'm so sorry for the abuse you endured. I've been through much of it in my lifetime too. I now work with those who have been abused. Healing that inner child is the only way to freedom.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Thanks Mel,
Thanks for an understanding and compassionate review.
Your time is appreciated.
:-) Shirley
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You're welcome.
Comment from Heidi M
This is so well-written. It's short and to the point. Your economy of words makes your final statement that much more profound: 'Finally I understand that to acknowledge who I am I must first set the child I was free'.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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This is so well-written. It's short and to the point. Your economy of words makes your final statement that much more profound: 'Finally I understand that to acknowledge who I am I must first set the child I was free'.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Thanks so much for reviewing.
I appreciate your comments.
I am trying to become more involved in contests to increase
my skills but still not always sure what is required.
:-) Shirley
Comment from apky
This was rather short and I wished you'd gone into more of the story. But it's your story and you wrote the way you wanted to write it and as a reader I have to accept that. Wish you not only a fab weekend but also a wonderful life ahead after you leave "the child" behind.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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This was rather short and I wished you'd gone into more of the story. But it's your story and you wrote the way you wanted to write it and as a reader I have to accept that. Wish you not only a fab weekend but also a wonderful life ahead after you leave "the child" behind.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Thanks for reviewing.
Your time and comments are appreciated.
:-) Shirley
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Seken, this is a moving and very well written piece of work. No words wasted but your message comes across very clearly. You are free in body but not in spirit it seems. Time, as they say, is a great healer. Good luck to you. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Seken, this is a moving and very well written piece of work. No words wasted but your message comes across very clearly. You are free in body but not in spirit it seems. Time, as they say, is a great healer. Good luck to you. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 25-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Thank you Dorothy,
I appreciate your time and kind review.
:-)Shirley
Comment from Dawn Munro
This is just the most touching and enlightening memoir - yes, we HAVE to set that child free, yet it is one of the most difficult things to do. There are oppressors everywhere, in one form or another, and they delight in humiliating, bullying, using us as dumping grounds for complaints...best of luck in the contest with this gem, my friend. Well done!!! (Wonderful artwork you chose too!)
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017
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This is just the most touching and enlightening memoir - yes, we HAVE to set that child free, yet it is one of the most difficult things to do. There are oppressors everywhere, in one form or another, and they delight in humiliating, bullying, using us as dumping grounds for complaints...best of luck in the contest with this gem, my friend. Well done!!! (Wonderful artwork you chose too!)
Comment Written 24-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017
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Thank you Dawn,
I agree Raoul is a very talented artist.
Thank you for a lovely review and ecouragement.
:-) Shirley
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Mustang Patty
This is a sad but true story about so many people. Countless lives have forever been scarred by abuse - be it physical, mental, or verbal. Your words detail the abuse without being graphic, and the message comes through loud and clear,
~patty~
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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This is a sad but true story about so many people. Countless lives have forever been scarred by abuse - be it physical, mental, or verbal. Your words detail the abuse without being graphic, and the message comes through loud and clear,
~patty~
Comment Written 23-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much for your lovely review.
I really appreciate your time
:-) Shirley
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
You might want to check your word count again for this one. It comes up in Word as 100 exactly but that's because it counts the ellipses as words which they aren't. With those removed it's only 98. It may get disqualified on this basis.
The piece itself is fine and well written with the internal musings and realisation well writ.
All the best
GMG
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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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Hi there,
You might want to check your word count again for this one. It comes up in Word as 100 exactly but that's because it counts the ellipses as words which they aren't. With those removed it's only 98. It may get disqualified on this basis.
The piece itself is fine and well written with the internal musings and realisation well writ.
All the best
GMG
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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Thanks for your review.
I appreciate your comments regarding the word count and ellipses.
I have changed it slightly by removing the ellipses and using words.
I may still be eliminatec for I don't know the rules regarding changes at this point.
I haven't had a lot of success with competitions but I figure I can't sit by the he fire forever I need to feel thd cold as well
:-) Shirley
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I pray for the day you are free from the torment of your childhood Shirley. It was not your fault dear, it is in them. Your parents. They are there to keep you safe not harm you. Nancy
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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I pray for the day you are free from the torment of your childhood Shirley. It was not your fault dear, it is in them. Your parents. They are there to keep you safe not harm you. Nancy
Comment Written 22-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Thank you Nancy,
Your compassionate review is much appreciated.
I've found writing so therapeutic and cleansing and those who understand are so supportive.
Your friendship and support allows me to move forward with positivity.
:-) Shirley
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
I was wrong ... his legacy is always just a thought away. I have walked a lifelong journey to be free. Sadly, most of the time I walked in a circle with no beginning and no end.
Finally I understand that to acknowledge who I am I must first set the child I was free. I feel so much for you I cannot express here. I know just how you feel, my abuser is in prison for a long stretch yet even when he dies I know I will never be free of him in the truest sense. You are so brave and I really hope this wins love Meia x(no sixes left I am sorry for that)
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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I was wrong ... his legacy is always just a thought away. I have walked a lifelong journey to be free. Sadly, most of the time I walked in a circle with no beginning and no end.
Finally I understand that to acknowledge who I am I must first set the child I was free. I feel so much for you I cannot express here. I know just how you feel, my abuser is in prison for a long stretch yet even when he dies I know I will never be free of him in the truest sense. You are so brave and I really hope this wins love Meia x(no sixes left I am sorry for that)
Comment Written 22-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Thank you Meia.
I appreciate your compassion and I'm sorry you understand all
too well what I have expressed.
Courage comes from within and increases with emotional growth and
the ability to let go of past hurts and move confidently forward.
These chapters of poetry and prose will go into my book as a reminder to me that all things are possible if I truly believe in myself and a brighter future.
I sincerely wisb you well as you walk your own path to release and freedom.
:-) Shirley
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
this is heart wrenching story I LOVED IT TREMENDOUSLY
took a lot of guts to write loved it good luck in the contest
my friend great gtreat write
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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this is heart wrenching story I LOVED IT TREMENDOUSLY
took a lot of guts to write loved it good luck in the contest
my friend great gtreat write
Comment Written 22-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Hi Abby,
Thank you so much for reviewing.
Your compassion and encouragement help make the path I walk
easier for I know you I understsnd my journey and walk with me as
part of my support team.
I cannot express how humbled I am by your six stars.
:-) Shirley
