Walk With Me.
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "None could tell."From victim to survivor of abuse.
6 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
A tragedy well told in verse. I like that you use the house and show that the building is not a home without love and safety in it. Hoping that despite all the pain in early childhood, you have experienced the love and warmth you need. Blessings.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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A tragedy well told in verse. I like that you use the house and show that the building is not a home without love and safety in it. Hoping that despite all the pain in early childhood, you have experienced the love and warmth you need. Blessings.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much for reviewing.
I appreciate your time.
:-) Shirley
Comment from nancy_e_davis
What a sad poem Shirley. I hate to think of a child cringing in the dark afraid and feeling unloved. I'm sorry you had such a sad, bad childhood. You made it through and like they say, "What doesn't kill you makes you strong." God bless you my friend. Hugs nancy
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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What a sad poem Shirley. I hate to think of a child cringing in the dark afraid and feeling unloved. I'm sorry you had such a sad, bad childhood. You made it through and like they say, "What doesn't kill you makes you strong." God bless you my friend. Hugs nancy
Comment Written 22-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Thank you Nancy for a caring and thoughtful review.
:-) Shirley
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
exceptional love love love it what an amazing write
best I have read all day!!! this truly touched my heart
boy I hope you sure do promote this I'm quite sure
it would get best of all times I mean WOW
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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exceptional love love love it what an amazing write
best I have read all day!!! this truly touched my heart
boy I hope you sure do promote this I'm quite sure
it would get best of all times I mean WOW
Comment Written 22-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Thanks Abby,
Your positive review and support is appreciated.
I am honoured and humbled by your lovely six stars.
:-) Shirley
Comment from melyuki
Hi Shirley , so pleased to see you unburdening your soul once more with this precious verse that speaks for itself. It is beautifully scribed and reflects those inner thoughts and feelings that desperately need to be unleashed and set free.. the rhyming and flow of the poem are grand and the picture used to express the thoughts within works perfectly. Thank you for your braveness in letting go ... sending bunches of happy smiles to you, mel xxx
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Hi Shirley , so pleased to see you unburdening your soul once more with this precious verse that speaks for itself. It is beautifully scribed and reflects those inner thoughts and feelings that desperately need to be unleashed and set free.. the rhyming and flow of the poem are grand and the picture used to express the thoughts within works perfectly. Thank you for your braveness in letting go ... sending bunches of happy smiles to you, mel xxx
Comment Written 22-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Thanks Mel,
This exceptional review is truly touching and much appreciated.
I really appreciate your compassionate review and continued support.
Honestly, I truly wish that my siblings and I were rescued and given counselling.
It is a long hard road to blunder along alone.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Our next door neighbor's pets are always running away. My wife asked why. I said, "They don't have a happy home."
A couple of months later, the husband ran away.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Our next door neighbor's pets are always running away. My wife asked why. I said, "They don't have a happy home."
A couple of months later, the husband ran away.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your review.
:-) Shirley
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello seken58, a poem of pain released. It is sad to say that some children would be safer living on the street than within the confines of their own home. Of sad note:
I once lived trapped within the walls
and had no one to hear my calls.
An iron fist controlled my voice
so silence was my only choice.
And:
The house was just an empty shell
with secrets I could never tell.
No laughter echoed in this space,
against the darkness I would brace.
(Heartbreaking)
s58, today you wrote something brave, and I hope that this poem sets you free. I leave a tear on your page. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Hello seken58, a poem of pain released. It is sad to say that some children would be safer living on the street than within the confines of their own home. Of sad note:
I once lived trapped within the walls
and had no one to hear my calls.
An iron fist controlled my voice
so silence was my only choice.
And:
The house was just an empty shell
with secrets I could never tell.
No laughter echoed in this space,
against the darkness I would brace.
(Heartbreaking)
s58, today you wrote something brave, and I hope that this poem sets you free. I leave a tear on your page. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 22-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much for reviewing with such empathy.
I hold your tear and it mingles with mine but this time I feel freedom not sadness and fear.
Thank you for walking with me in this chapter of my book as I walk a path of release.
:-) Shirley
