Our blue print
A tanka contest.22 total reviews
Comment from Unspoken94
Mary, I have always valued your work but this piece
is exceptional. It makes this reader go deep within
myself. I hope we get to vote in this one. You've
got mine. -Bill
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017
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Mary, I have always valued your work but this piece
is exceptional. It makes this reader go deep within
myself. I hope we get to vote in this one. You've
got mine. -Bill
Comment Written 24-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017
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Wow Bill I am so happy that you really like my entry into the tanka contest. The six stars are so welcome and appreciated. Thanks, Mary
Comment from Joan E.
After I read the intriguing title and scrolled down the page, I was surprised to see the image. It was an ah ha moment as I read your tanka. I admired your pivot and message. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017
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After I read the intriguing title and scrolled down the page, I was surprised to see the image. It was an ah ha moment as I read your tanka. I admired your pivot and message. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 23-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017
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Thanks Joan for the excellent review, I love your comments. Mary
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your tanka "Our Blueprint." What a wonderful invention. They were not around when I came into the world. All your lines and syllables were correct.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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I enjoyed reading your tanka "Our Blueprint." What a wonderful invention. They were not around when I came into the world. All your lines and syllables were correct.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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Thanks for the excellent review and great comments, Mary
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from Kerry Foley
That was truly a spectacular Tanka entry.
I absolutely loved it. "from the blueprint you evolve"
=outstanding. Good luck. ~Kerry~
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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That was truly a spectacular Tanka entry.
I absolutely loved it. "from the blueprint you evolve"
=outstanding. Good luck. ~Kerry~
Comment Written 22-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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Thanks Kerry, I am so pleased that you think my tanka as spectacular, Mary
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Your welcome
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Great Tanka for this contest Mary, and a good message. I agree we need to listen to our inner wisdom or our sixth sense because it's usually leading us down the right path for us. Nicely done, and good luck in the contest.
cheers
valda
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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Great Tanka for this contest Mary, and a good message. I agree we need to listen to our inner wisdom or our sixth sense because it's usually leading us down the right path for us. Nicely done, and good luck in the contest.
cheers
valda
Comment Written 22-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much Valda for the exceptional review and the wonderful comments. I really appreciate it, Mary
Comment from Ella25
It is a fascinating concept and beautifully presented, Mary. The baby in the womb is a real miracle. So precious and protected. A blueprint of life. Well done. Best luck in the contest. With love, Ella
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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It is a fascinating concept and beautifully presented, Mary. The baby in the womb is a real miracle. So precious and protected. A blueprint of life. Well done. Best luck in the contest. With love, Ella
Comment Written 22-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Thanks ella for your excellent review and great comments. Mary
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You are welcome, Mary. Sorry for the late respond. I have been away from this site for few days. Other things keep me busy. With love, Ella
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting Tanka poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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This is a very interesting Tanka poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 21-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Thanks Teri for a wonderful review and great comments. Mary
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We all have our own unique blueprint which sets us apart from each other. These identifying traits can either blight or give us flight. I wish you good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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We all have our own unique blueprint which sets us apart from each other. These identifying traits can either blight or give us flight. I wish you good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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hi Dolly I am so pleased you enjoyed my tanka about our blue print, thanks. Mary
Comment from country ranch writer
The first time I saw amsonafram I was amazed mat how far our technology had come. Wow they can do so much these days it is a miracle of birth that astounds us and keeps us in awe.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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The first time I saw amsonafram I was amazed mat how far our technology had come. Wow they can do so much these days it is a miracle of birth that astounds us and keeps us in awe.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the excellent review and great comments. Mary
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
'we can be stronger
guided by inner wisdom
it lies deep within
a purpose to develop
from our blue print we evolve'
How beautiful this poem is! The wonderful words of this poem made me feel very emotional you have a great talent brilliant work xxMeia x
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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'we can be stronger
guided by inner wisdom
it lies deep within
a purpose to develop
from our blue print we evolve'
How beautiful this poem is! The wonderful words of this poem made me feel very emotional you have a great talent brilliant work xxMeia x
Comment Written 21-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Hi Meia I am delighted that you really enjoyed my tanka and found it to be brilliant work. Thank you so much, Mary