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Wild Clover

Wild clover seems to have an energy to it.

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Comment from Mustang Patty
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Such a cute poem! Yes, clover do appear to jump and roll with the breeze. Thank you for sharing this whimsical piece,
~patty~

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2017

reply by the author on 17-Mar-2017
    Thank you for seeing what I see.
Comment from Janet Foor
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A delightful flower 5/7/5 poem.
Excellent use of alliteration with somersault - steep and topsy turvy.

Well done.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2017

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
    Thank you for your wonderful comments.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written 5-7-5 about a flower. I don't think I ever saw wild purple clover, the way you describe it in your poem seems to be worth looking at.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2017

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
    It is worth looking at.
Comment from robyn corum
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Dear Mystery Writer,

This was a fun poem about the clover and I could see it happening. *smile* Only a couple of notes for you:

1.) somersault(s) down steep hillsides

2.) land(s) topsy-turvy

Thanks and good luck

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2017

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
    Clover is both singular and plural. Thank you for your positive comments.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Yes this is well written and indeed made me smile you painted a very good picture for the readers well done good luck regards Jill

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2017

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
    Thank you for your encouragement.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Wild purple clover <>somersault down steep hillsides
land topsy-turvy

Hello, my friend,

good job with the connection between lines one and two. Your satori is lovely

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2017

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
    Thank you I always appreciate your point of view.
Comment from winnona
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A well-written contest entry. I think you completed the challenge of the contest very well. The purple clover flower is delicate, beautiful and you can make a tea out of it. Every grazing animal loves clover too. Well done.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2017

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
    Thank you for your good words.
Comment from bertranclan
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I enjoyed your 5-7-5 Flower poem. I think it should do well in the contest as it brings sharp images to mind. I myself am not gifted in the 5-7-5 poem nor haiku of any kind, but I sure love to read them! Bravo!

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2017

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
    Thank you for such good words and encouragement.
Comment from marybell1
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I enjoyed reading your poem about wild clover. I use to roll in it and make a band to wear over my head. - happy memories.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2017

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
    Thank you for your memories and your good comments.
reply by marybell1 on 16-Mar-2017
    You are most welcome.
    Marybell1.
Comment from dragonpoet
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Nice haiku that gives clear image of clover growing down a mountainside. Or maybe its someone rolling down a hill covered with purple clover.

Good luck in the contest.

Keep writing

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2017

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
    Thank you for your very encouraging words.
reply by dragonpoet on 15-Mar-2017
    You're welcome. It's what we are here for.

    dragonpoet